I can not post my audio file in this post, therefore, I post it by Youtube video link. Please give me some advices for my pronunciation. Thank you!

https://youtu.be/DvU2Bb4Pryk

DvU2Bb4Pryk

Công Thành Phanadvices

Delete the last letter.


The main issues with your pronunciation are the long pauses between words and the nasal sound when you speak. You should stop that sound and try to make words flow without such long pauses.