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Hi

My question is as follow...

I want to inform my bussines parter about the following issued. Please correct my grammer and sent to me.

Subject : Water Supply Product

Dear Mr.xxx

For your information, regarding the Water Save Product, i have one client (Hotel Manager) interested on this product. But the problem is he want us to do a demonstration for this product. The place everything was arrange by them. Only we have to do is showing how this product works to public and proof that by using this product we really can save a lot of water.

So, please advise me on this matter.

Regards,

Vijay
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I assume this is an email? If you don't know the name of the hotel manager, or his name is not important, just substitute "Hotel Manager Name" with "a hotel manager"

Dear Mr. xxx,

I do have one client, Hotel Manager Name, who is currently interested in the Water Save Product. However, he would like for us to demonstrate the product. The demonstration location and other details will be arranged by them - all we need to do is show up and demonstrate to the public how the product works and that it actually saves water.

I await your advice on how to proceed.

Regards,
Vijay
Hi,

Please correct my sentence/grammer below.

Dear Sir

For your information, regarding the Water Save Product, i have one client (Hotel Manager) interested on this product. But the problem is he want us to do a demonstration for this product. The place everything was arrange by them. Only we have to do is showing how this product works to public and proof that by using this product we really can save a lot of water.

So, please advise me on this matter.

Regards,

Mr.XXX
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Hi

Yes it's a email. Thanks for your kind reply. Now i corrected my email and already sent it to my Boss

Regards,

Vijay