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I write to let you know that I have accomplished the third prize of Informatics in the National Contest. Additionally, I continued being honored as Excellent Student on my senior year’s first semester.
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I write to let you know that I have won third prize for Informatics in the national contest. Additionally, I continued being honored as an 'Excellent Student' in the first semester of my senior year.
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You will give me opportunities for a higher education and thus becoming a successful and responsible citizen.
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I hope that you will give me the opportunity for a higher education and the chance to become a successful and responsible citizen.
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