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1- qualities of good doctor.

Doctor who someone take care well of all patients and give them a hope for recovery. Doctors are important people in the community and they should posses several good qualities.

First of all, a good doctor is somebody who cares of people and not just for the income. A good doctor always listens to his/her patient problems and take time to get know their patients. Good doctors deal with their patients amiably or humanly. In addition, characteristics of discipline and probity must found in good doctors. For example, they should always come on time to work and do their tasks. Faithful doctors strictly observe all the laws and regulations of the career. Good doctor have to give their best for the patient with mind, heat and soul. As well, a good doctor must be responsible and dependable. He / she must be at the right time when someone need him/her and give all the best they have for their patient wholeheartly. Above of all, a good doctor has to be knowledgeable and skillful in his/her career. Good doctors must be able to put their tools for good use. For instance, they must hear all that the patient tells with their ears. They ought to see that entire patient shows with their eyes. They must feel all that is hidden from patient with their hands. Doctors must detect all that is unspoken with their mind. When all this information has been assimilated, they must use their mouths to tell patients their thoughts to reassure them.

The career of doctors is a great job because they take care of people and their health. Also, doctors are very important people in all communities and play an important role in the life. Thus they should posses good qualities.
1- qualities of a good doctor.

Doctor who someone take care well of all patients and give them a hope for recovery Of course everyone knows this information.Emotion: smile. Doctors are important people in the community and they should posses several good qualities.This sentence is not a good start. Tell us why? Attract us!

First of all, a good doctor is somebody who cares of people and not just for the income. Rephrase this sentence. A good doctor always listens to his/her patient's problems and take time to get know their patients. Good doctors deal with their patients amiably or and humanly.Try to find another word. In addition, characteristics of discipline and probity must found in good doctors. For example, they should always come on time to work and do their tasks. Faithful doctors strictly observe all the laws and regulations of the career. Good doctor have to give their best best what? for the patient with mind, heat and soul. As well, a good doctor must be responsible and dependable. He / she must be at the right time when someone needs him/her and give all the best they have for their patient wholeheartly. Above of all, a good doctor has to be knowledgeable and skillful in his/her career. Good doctors must be able to put their tools for good use. For instance, they must hear all that the patient tells with their ears. Oh No! Don't add this of course everyone hears with their ear.:DThey ought to see that entire patient shows with their eyes. They must feel all that is hidden from patient with their hands.What do you mean? Doctors must detect all that is unspoken with their mind. When all this information has been assimilated, they must use their mouths to tell patients their thoughts to reassure them. Lol. that is funny.

The career of doctors is a great job a careeer is not a job.because they take care of people and their health. Also, doctors are very important people in all communities and play an important role in the life. You mentioned the underlined sentence before just omit it.Thus they should posses good qualities.

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