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Hello there, I'm new to this forum so I'm not sure about any posting/asking restriction so I have to say sorry in advance if I break any rules. Anyway, I'm not exactly good with my english because I'm a Thai. Please help me check th sentences below. It was meant display at the back of my DVD cover design for my school's animation project.

"If you think of this as just another story of a hero defeating a monster to save the world, 'My Mother - Momzilla' is about to prove you wrong. Composes of an unfimiliar Godzilla who even has a beard and a halo, and another devilish human creature that is even more monstrous than him, this story is far from ordinary. So grab your popcorn, sit back, relax, and let's root for our hero, The Pongy Man's victory."

Thanks in advance for your reply.
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Hi,

"If you think of this as just another story of a hero defeating a monster to save the world, 'My Mother - Momzilla' is about to prove you wrong. Composes of an unfimiliar Godzilla who even has a beard and a halo, and another devilish human creature that is even more monstrous than him, this story is far from ordinary. So grab your popcorn, sit back, relax, and let's root for our hero, The Pongy Man's victory."

This is pretty good English. I haven't suggested a lot of changes.

"If you think of this as just another story of a hero defeating a monster to save the world, 'My Mother - Momzilla' is about to prove you wrong. Composed of an unfamiliar Godzilla who even has a beard and a halo, and another devilish human creature that is even more monstrous than he is, this story is far from ordinary. So grab your popcorn, sit back, relax, and let's root for our hero The Pongy Man's victory."


Best wishes, Clive
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Hey, I'd like to see this film!
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Thanks so much for the help. As for the animation itself, it's not actually a good one as I don't have much experiences in this. I'm still working on it though.. the submission is on 26 nov. I might get it upload on YouTube once I'm done with it.
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