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Today is Monday, it is staring day of this week . I was spend all day in library . I was learning English , sky some website , my yahoo blog but I spend almost on English forum <dot>com.

I say I love English very much but I am not good at . I have asked many friend and teacher to to learn English . I am working hard . I always ask myself “ why don’t I learn English well?”
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Today is Monday, it is staring day of this week . I was spend all day in library . I was learning English , sky some website , my yahoo blog but I spend almost on English forum <dot>com.



I say I love English very much but I am not good at . I have asked many friend and teacher to to learn English . I am working hard . I always ask myself “ why don’t I learn English well?”

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Today is Monday, the first day of the week. I spent all day in library. I was learning English , sky some website [ I don't understand this part] and worked on my Yahoo blog, but I spend almost all my time on www.EnglishForward.com.

I say I love English very much, but I am not good at . I have asked many friends and teachers to help me learn English. I am working hard. I always ask myself “Why can't I learn English well?”

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Your sentences are perfectly understandable (except the "sky" part - did you mean "surf the Web"?) so don't worry too much. The rest will come!
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