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1) I hear from your colleague that the production will being today. How can you meet the function inspection on Aug 23? Please advise.

2) The cargo was inspected and had been pending from August 19. Therefore, the shipped quantity was changed to AB1234 of 7000pcs only. Will keep you posted for the update stage.

3) Noted the inspection will be arranged tomorrow. Please find the attached revised booking for your reference.

4) I knew Mary is not handling for this account now. Could you please to check any penalty from Kmart for this shipment?

5) Can we switch the loading port to Hong Kong and catch the vessel which is match with your deadline.
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I'm not good at correcting grammar and offering better vocabulary options, but the following hints are just a few suggestions till you get better responses from others.

1. I've heard ...

2. ... Will keep you posted of ...

4. I knew Mary wasn't handling this account then/ I know Mary isn't handling this account now. Could you please to check for any penalties applied by Kmart to this shipment?

5. .... get the vessel which fits to your deadline.
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This needs fixing.
Stellayau1) I hear from your colleague that the production will being today.

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