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Hi Teachers,

Would you correct if there are any mistakes in this paragraph?

Remember, Grant and Flash both build houses, but Grant's workers build them much better. They build houses slowly and carefully. They also work harder than Flash’s workers. Flash’s workers build houses quickly but badly. They work much faster than Grant's. Too fast in fact. Their houses aren’t built as well as Grant's of course.

Thanks in advance
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Hi,

Remember, Grant and Flash both build houses, but Grant's workers build them much better. They build houses slowly and carefully. They also work harder than Flash’s workers. Flash’s workers build houses quickly but badly. They work much faster than Grant's. Too fast, in fact. Their houses aren’t built as well as Grant's, of course.

Clive
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Hi Clive,

Thank you for your correction. Just two commas this time. Not so bad. Emotion: smile

Regards,

TS