hello,

Please help me edit this letter please, I am going to put it on my web site.
thank you,
Plai-or

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May 23, 2005

Hello,

My name is Plai-or Aroonrat, if you don’t know how to pronounce my name you can pronounce it like tools “prior”. I was born in Thailand 1965, and I am 40 years old now. I think I old enough to share some of my experience in the past, my opinion about our world in nowadays, and some of my visions in the future of this world.

I am not trying to be an expert in any area of my topic articles, they are only my experience in the past and my opinion. I am going to write them because I need to make myself useful for others before I die from this world and never have a chance to talk about it.

I am not a lazy person since I was kid till now, I have a Mathematic degree from the university, but I don’t have any career right now because something in my mind bothering me. You will know what is it from my articles, and I hope it will give you some knowledge and ideas for living your life.

Regards,
Plai-or Aroonrat
“This world belongs to you”
Plai-or,

It's a good introductory letter. I've posted my suggested edit for grammatical errors trying not to edit content too much. In some instances I have changed the order of words to make more sense to a native English speaker.

'Hello,

My name is Plai-or Aroonrat. If you don't know how to pronounce my name you can pronounce it like "prior". I was born in Thailand in 1965, and am now 40 years old. I think I am old enough now to share some of my past experiences, my opinion of our world nowadays, and some of my visions for the future of this world.

I am not claiming to be an expert in any area of my topic articles, they are only my personal past experiences and my opinions. I am writing them so I can talk about these things and be of some use to others before I die.

I am not a lazy person and have not wasted my life. I have a Mathematics degree from university, but I don't have a career right now because something in my mind is bothering me. You will know from reading my articles what that is, and I hope that they give you some knowledge and ideas for living your life.

Regards,
Plai-or Aroonrat
"This world belongs to you"'
Hi Dear

Firstly Very Very thanks to that lady who wanted to share her feelings with others.
Keep it up.Second i am always thankful to the people who try to help others .
As far as we are concerned here to do some ammendment so i will also try to participate in that though i am not a native English Speaker this is my 3rd language.So this will not be the accuracy but some effort .

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Hello ,

My name is Plai-or Aroonrat. If this is difficult to pronounce so you can call me "prior". I was born in Thailand in 1965, and am now 40 years old . I am old enough now to share some of my past experiences, my opinions for our world of this era, and some of my visions are for the future of world.

I am not claiming to be the expert in any area of tipic included in my articles. They are just only my personal past experinces and then some opinions based on these experineces. I am writing them so I can talk about these things and could make some use of these to others before I die.

I am not a lazy person and have not wasted my life. I have a Mathematics degree from university, but I don't have a career right now because something in my mind is bothering me. You will come to know when you will read my articles what that is, and I hope that they will give you some knowledge and ideas for living your life.

Regards

Plai-or Aroonrat

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Fasi,

That's a good rewrite with slightly different interpretation to mine, however there are a few grammar errors. I think you're opening line is incorrect though, the writer doesn't want to actually be called 'prior,' it's included to demonstrate how to pronounce Plai-or. Your version should read as follows:

Hello ,

My name is Plai-or Aroonrat. If this is difficult to pronounce it rhymes with "prior". I was born in Thailand in 1965 and am now 40 years old . I am old enough now to share some of my past experiences, my opinions for our world of this era, and some of my visions are for the future.

I am not claiming to be an expert in any area of topics included in my articles. They are only my personal past experiences and opinions based on these experineces. I am writing them so I can talk about these things and make some use of them with others before I die.

I am not a lazy person and have not wasted my life. I have a Mathematics degree from university, but I don't have a career right now because something in my mind is bothering me. You will come to know when you read my articles what that is, and I hope that they will give you some knowledge and ideas for living your life.

Regards

Plai-or Aroonrat
Dear rwiles,

Sorry for that mat, my intentions were not to pointing out the incorrections or corrections which you made. Might be the the way i adopted it was wrong sorry for that.Anyways thank you for correcting my gramattical errors.
You were telling that i tried to rewrite something so it is not like that. Infact i wanted to change only few things but for them i was supposed to write the complete letter. So that was the way i did. I could be wrong. Anyways i think i could learn from you.It sounds you are quite familiar with English langauge.Keep it up.
OK Good luck.
May I ask what is the difference between "you will know" and "you will come to know"?
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Yes you can ask.

" you will come to know " is more formal than " you will know " this is what i think.

It would be my pleasure if someone find it wrong and make it correct

Thanks.