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I have several sentence correction from my english homework. I tried to fix the sentence, but i am not sure if they are right. Can you guys give me some advices and suggestions? thank you so much

Original sentence is in bold, my correction is in italic.

1.It took two weeks to clean up the mess, city of Long Beach finally came back to normal life. (2 errors)

It took two weeks to clean up the mess, people in city of Long Beach finally came back to normal life.

2.There were the sound of screaming and crying all throughout the planet. (2 errors)

There were sound of screaming and crying throughout the planet.

3. Parents were looking for their children, no one know where to go. (2 errors)

Parents were looking for their children, and no one knew where to go.

4. In the end there was no where to run or hide, they were buries alive. (3 errors)

In the end they were buried alive because there were no where for them to run or hide.

5. It is not everyday that you get to see an unidentified flying object...(2 errors)

You don't get to see an unidentified flying object everyday.

6 They had to hide on their homes in order to not get harmed by the evil birds which cause terror. (2 errors)

They had to hide in their homes in order to not getting harmed by the evil birds which cause terror.
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Comments  
1. mess before the city of

2. sounds (plural)

3. I'd drop the comma.

4. nowhere is one word.

5. every day - two words

6. to not get
thank you so much. I had revised it, does this look ok to you?

Assignment# 32 Fix it

I have several sentence correction from my english homework. I tried to fix the sentence, but i am not sure if they are right. Can you guys give me some advices and suggestions?

Original sentence is in bold, my correction is in italic.

1. It took two weeks to clean up the mess, city of Long Beach finally came back to normal life. (2 errors)

It took two weeks to clean up the mess in city of Long Beach, people finally came back to normal life.

2. There were the sound of screaming and crying all throughout the planet. (2 errors)

There were sounds of screaming and crying throughout the planet.

3. Parents were looking for their children, no one know where to go. (2 errors)

Parents were looking for their children and no one knew where to go.

4. In the end there was no where to run or hide, they were buries alive. (3 errors)

In the end they were buried alive because there were nowhere for them to run or hide.

5. It is not everyday that you get to see an unidentified flying object...(2 errors)

You don't get to see an unidentified flying object every day.

6 They had to hide on their homes in order to not get harmed by the evil birds which cause terror. (2 errors)

They had to hide in their homes in order to not get harmed by the evil birds which cause terror.
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Assignment# 32 Fix it

I have several sentence correction from my english homework. I tried to fix the sentence, but i am not sure if they are right. Can you guys give me some advices and suggestions?

Original sentence is in bold, my correction is in italic.

1. It took two weeks to clean up the mess, city of Long Beach finally came back to normal life. (2 errors)

It took two weeks to clean up the mess in the city of Long Beach, but people finally came back to normal life.




6 They had to hide on their homes in order to not get harmed by the evil birds which cause terror. (2 errors)

They had to hide in their homes in order not to get harmed by the evil birds which cause terror.

Best wishes, Clive
fix this sentence

In distance education the majority of the instructors or courses offered are not in the same place with an instructor or student.
What do you think is wrong with it?

I don't know how the isntructor can not be in the same place as an instructor. Are you worried about logic or grammar?

(P.S. It's a little bit nicer to say "please" instead of commanding us to do things.)
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Subject: - Temporary Arrangement

Dear Sir

This is to inform you that. We are moving one of the computers that is lying on main gate for auction. For the temporary basis to help one of the member in marketing department. We will replace the computer once we received the new computer machine. Plz allow Mr. Ranjeet / Mr. Meghshyam

(I have no idea what you mean by 'auction'. You have left your last sentence unfinished.)

To: H.R.
Subject: Temporary Arrangement

Dear Sir:

This is to inform you that we are moving one of the computers at the main gate for auction on a temporary basis to help a member of the marketing department. We will replace the computer once we receive the new one. Please allow Mr. Ranjeet / Mr. Meghshyam to....

I have been working to much since I lived in this country.
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