Hello teachers!
all of you may know, I'm writing my final essay. (I've posted quite a lot thesedays for that essay!)
here's another one paragraph which needs grammar check!
Thanks in advance!


Analysing two different types of traumas enabled me to compare one significant point. That is distinct ways to treat those different kinds of traumas. One of the popular treatments, The Interpretation of Dreams was first introduced in 1900 by Sigmund Freud. Freud argued that psychological disorders come from the unconsciousness of mental state of oneself- Emotions buried in the unconscious surface during dreaming, and the remembered fragments of dreams can help uncover the buried feelings. This psychotherapy, however, was failed because of the difficulties to figure out certain patterns of dreams. Also its interpretations were totally rely on the therapist which results in the lack of objectivity. Nowadays the psychotherapy is done by listening up to patient, defining main cause, finding the solutions.
Well, my English is not perfect, but I think you made some errors.

Analyzing two different types of traumas enabled me to realize one significant thing. That is there are distinct ways to treat those different kinds of traumas. One of the popular literary works, The Interpretation of Dreams was first introduced in 1900 by Sigmund Freud. Freud argued that psychological disorders come from the unconsciousness of one's mental state. Emotions buried in the unconscious surface during dreaming, and the remembered fragments of dreams can help uncover the buried feelings. This treatment, however, had a major shortcoming; namely the difficulty to figure out certain patterns of dreams. Furthermore, its interpretations totally relied on the judgment of the therapist, which made it lack objectivity. During the present time, psychotherapy proceeds as follows: listening to the patient, defining main causes, finding solutions.
I am not a teacher and English is not my native language so I would recommend you to wait until someone more qualified than me comes to your help.
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Appreciate your consideration, wholegrain!
I think your corrections are right but I'm not sure since I'm still learning Emotion: big smile