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This is the email their sent to me. Now i want to reply back with good written impressive email

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Hello,
This is with regards to your CV with us.

 3 years of experience in networking
 Selling cabling and networking solutions
 Selling h/w & s/w solutions


If interested, please get back to us ASAP with the following details:

1)Your Strong Areas / Areas of Interests / Suitability with regard to the above specified position:
2) Current Salary:
3)Minimum Salary Expectation:
4)How soon you can join after the confirmation of selection:
5)Contact Telephone Numbers:
6)Date of Birth, Gender, Marital Status, Name of your current living place & nationality:

Kindly respond with your updated CV as soon as possible.

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This is how i written.

Dear Madam/Sir,

Thanks for considering me for this opportunity.

I have more than 3 years experience as your requirement.


1)Your Strong Areas / Areas of Interests / Suitability with regard to the above specified position:
What should i write here ?


2) Current Salary:
3xxx


3)Minimum Salary Expectation:
4xxx


4)How soon you can join after the confirmation of selection:
Immediately


5)Contact Telephone Numbers:
9x5xx436x47


6)Date of Birth, Gender, Marital Status, Name of your current living place & nationality:
I already mention in the CV

Regards,
Feng


Please check this and if there is anything is missing plz add it up Emotion: smile
I'll really appreciate your efforts : )
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Hi, and welcome to English Forums.

Only you can tell us what you're good at and why you are well-suited for the position.

We can't write that for you. But if you write your paragraph about that, we can take a look.

(Just a side note: I'm always surprised when employers ask for things that are illegal in the US to ask about, like your age and marital status. Are those things that you commonly tell your employer there?)
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Thanks for your quick reply back.

I understand what u said and that y i joined this forum to improve my english.

Here is the pagagraph..

I am sending you this letter in response to the email you sent me for a Sales Executives. After reviewing my resume, I think you will find that I am well qualified and have ample experience to fill the position. I have more than 3 years of experience in networking feild. I can easily negotiate with networking solutions. Additionally, I have experience with financial analysis, advertising and marketing, in a consultative sales environment. During my 4 year professional career, I have been in a sales capacity, either face-to-face conversations with cilents.

Some other abilities of mine that you should be aware of include:
  • Excellent researching skills. My experience has taught me that without research, a project is far less effective.
  • Strong leadership talent and a good attitude. A company works much better when employees are happy.
  • Proven organization skills and multi-tasking abilities. Timelines are not a problem for me, even when under intense pressure.
  • Open mindedness to new techniques or approaches. I am welcome to suggestions on how to solve problems.
Currently salary, 3x$
Minimum Salary Expectation:4x$
How soon you can join after the confirmation of selection: I would like to join immediately

I hope you will consider me for the Sales Executives. position. Enclosed is a copy of my resume. I have open availability for an interview. Please feel free to contact me via the phone number or email address provided on the header of my resume.

Sincere,
Feng

My brother has helped me to write this letter and some lines i tried to do as myself..
as you know my english is very weaken yet. PLEASE ANY CORRECTION YOU CAN DO WOULD BE APRREACIATE : )