hi everybody,

this is a paragraph whish I wrote. I will be grateful if. you read it and tell me if is ok or not and what are the mistakes i did..

thanks
There are a lot of things which we all own. Some of these items are considered important especially when they are expensive. Moreover, some can be the most valuable items. Of course that would differ from a person to another. The book "Don't be Sad " is my most valuable item I ever had although it does not cost me much. For me, it is the light in the darkness of this world. Whenever I feel sad, it is there to illuminate my sad heart .As soon as I start reading among its pages, I find the cure for all my pains . In brief, if I don’t have this book my life and thoughts would be so different.
You've made a fairly good start with it. There are a few mistakes which I've corrected. I've tried to alter the mistakes without completely changing/affecting the paragraph...Emotion: smile

There are plenty of items that we own. Some of these items are considered important particulary if they are expensive. Moreover, some can be the most (wasn't sure whether you were trying to say invaluable instead of valuable) valuable items. Of course that would differ from person to person. The book "Don't be Sad " is my most valuable item I've ever owned, even though it didn't cost me much. For me, it is the light in the darkness of this world ( or "the light in this dark world"). Whenever I feel sad, it is there to illuminate my sad heart .As soon as I start reading, I find the cure for all my pains . Overall (more appropriate word for "In Brief"), if I don’t have this book my life and thoughts would be very different.
hi ..K-M,

Thanks alot for giving a time to help me.I' m very grateful that you've corrected my mistakes.