Another silent story of turning back
To look at the zenith of my mountain

Bleeding into my old existence
I hear the poems of disillusion
Dreams are flowing up to stream
Hidden against the sun of Blackness
Fraternity of lies blesses you then
As if I'm still here with these

I'm really waiting for your comments specially negative ones 'Cause I need them
You mates who speak english fluently , I believe in you'll examine this event in complete

that's so good...
thank youuuuu
you mAde me glad
but can anyone make a comment in-depth? as far as the poem allows