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Context: To check whether they want to redesign the website, after visiting their websites.

I am going to send cold email to North america companies like manufacturing and construction sectors etc as my boss, resides in the US, may meet them once they respond. Please suggest the likes of North american.


Subject line

"Would you like to redesign your webstite? "


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Dear M/s. abcd organization

This is Kumar from abc marketing agency based in India. I browsed through your website. If you would like us to redesign the website in a high professional way, we would be happy to do so. Please check our capabilities/other services as shown on our website at https://website/ and reach me at abcEmail Removed" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">.in to move further and, also Our Managing director Mr. Murali murthy is in Newyork. He will contact you regarding this. Thanks
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Dear Sir/Madam,

M/s. abcd organization

This is Kumar from Abc Marketing Agency, based in India. I browsed through your website and can see the potential for significant improvement. If you would like us to redesign the website in a highly professional way, we would be happy to do so. Please check out our capabilities/other services as shown on our website at https://website/. and You can reach me at EMAIL abcEmail Removed" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">.in to move further and, also or you can contact our managing director Mr. Murali Murthy who is based in New York at EMAIL. Our websites designs are very popular, and our rates are competitive.

He will contact you regarding this. Thanks

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teechrand out rates are competitive.

Typo. "Our rates", of course.

Thank for your correction. It is very useful.

Please suggest the likes of North american.

I wrote it in the context. Is "the likes of North american" correct?


Subject line

"Would you like to redesign your webstite? "

Is this subject line suitable here?

kumenglishI wrote it in the context. Is "the likes of North american" correct?

I don't understand what that means.

kumenglishIs this subject line suitable here?

Yes, it's okay.

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Right; typo corrected. Thank you, anonymous.