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Hi, Need some help, does this makes sense and approriate sentence formation.

I would like to sincerely thank you, for giving me the opportunity and time to discuss my future interests of my personal growth in the company. I really appreciate the feedback and direction which you have given me.

In our discussion i did missed to ask your opinion on relocation from TX to NY.

Our senior supervisor said that people you are interested to relocate to NY, because of office space availability, are you open on this for your team.
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I would like to sincerely thank you, for giving me the opportunity and time to discuss my future interests of my personal growth in the company. I really appreciate the feedback and direction which you have given me.

In our discussion I missed a chance to ask your opinion on relocation from TX to NY.

Our senior supervisor said that your people are interested in relocating to NY, due to the availability of more office space, than in your area. Would you be open to talks on this for your team and you?

Thank you for your time and consideration,
they shoud be tabbed all three seperations it didnt show in the post, and instert your name, at end
department and contact info presonal as well as bussness should be included.
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I would like to sincerely thank you for providing me with the opportunity and time to discuss my future interests of my personal growth in the company. I really appreciate the feedback and direction which you have given me.>>

In our discussion I missed a chance to ask your opinion on relocation from TX to NY.>>

Our senior supervisor said that you are ineterested in relocating your people to NY, due to the availability of more office space there. Are you open to talks on this issue for your team?

Just my opinion Emotion: wink