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Nowadays, reading and writing habit has been receiving a great deal from public attention. Although this trend can be attributed to a whole host of reasons, some feasible solutions can be considered to address this.

There are a number of problems caused by losing ability to read or write. First, since almost information exists in form of words, ability to read or write is necessary. In fact, this skill is an indispensable skill which will support for job down the road and losing work opportunity. Second, because of inability to read or write, pp may lose their interests. This means that unfairness has potential to affect individual's life which degrade standard of their living.

Nevertheless, there are a variety of solutions to reserve that trend. First, by creating many centers to teach reading and writing, government can decrease the number of an illiterate person. For example, making evening continuation classes can supply good chances for an unschooled person to improve their reading and writing ability. Second, in order to support illiterate person, the government can facilitate them by supplying a kind of certificate instead of a Temporary Certificate of High School Graduation. This means that the certificate will be available for many jobs in the society which facilitate to land decent jobs.

In conclusion, although reading or writing is an important ability to all of pp, some illiterate person can find the solutions. By considering all possible ways, government should be able to deal with the problem/ find the best approach.

Thank you very much.

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Topic: : Nowadays, many pp cannot read or write. What problems does this can cause? What measures can governments take to solve these problem. There are several errors in this essay topic. Please copy the instructions correctly and post as a "comment" in this thread.

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Tú MinhNowadays, reading and writing habit has been receiving a great deal from public attention. Although this trend can be attributed to a whole host of reasons, some feasible solutions can be considered to address this.

You memorized a sentence pattern for this. That is not good. You did not remember it correctly, either, so it has mistakes..

The examiners know that students memorize sentences for the essay. They do not give a good score for memorized sentences.

Your opening paragraph must be your own and directly address the topic.


There are a number of problems caused by losing (incorrect. People do not forget how to read or write unless they have a severe brain injury.) ability to read or write. First, since almost information (incorrect phrase. There is useful information, bad information and deceptive information. There is no such thing as "almost information.") exists in the form of words, the ability to read or write is necessary. In fact, this skill is an indispensable skill (Avoid repeating words.) which will support for (wrong word) job down the road and losing work opportunity. (incorrect phrase.) Second, because of the inability to read or write, pp (That is not an English word.) may lose their interests. This means that unfairness has potential to affect individual's life which degrade standard of their living. (That is not good English.)

Nevertheless, there are a variety of solutions to reserve (wrong word) that trend. (wrong word) First, by creating many centers to teach reading and writing, government can decrease the number of an illiterate person. (wrong phrase "An illiterate person" is one man or one woman. ) For example, making evening continuation classes can supply good chances (unnatural phrase) for an unschooled person to improve their reading and writing ability. Second, in order to support illiterate person, (wrong form) the government can facilitate them (unnatural phrase) by supplying a kind of certificate instead of a Temporary Certificate of High School Graduation. This means that the certificate will be available (wrong word) for many jobs in the society which facilitate (wrong word) to land decent jobs.

In conclusion, although reading or writing is an important ability to all of pp, some illiterate person can find the solutions. By considering all possible ways, government should be able to deal with the problem/ find the best approach.