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These days, with he development of Internet connection and sofware, online education has become increasely popularity in many countries. However, some ppl believed that distance learning can never replace traditional classroom. Personally, I firmly agree with this statement becausse online courses have many disadvantage. And this essay will address the reasons for my views as follow.

To begin with, virtual classroom depend upon facilities and equipment. Computer, Internet and camera plays important roles for onlne learning. As the result, an unstable Interne connection or other technical pronlems can ruin a lesson. In addition, not at all teachers have enough knowledge about field of technology to fix all problems in computer or app and not at all student have access to high – quality computers or good conditional Internet for e-learning system.

Secondly, online learning decline the social skill of students. A significant part of going to school is making friends and communicating with others, which helps students gain the social skills to become comprehensive adults in the future. For example, if student go to classroom, teacher will create some group activities for student to solve the problem together and teacher can assess clearly each group or student. But study through computer, student can take full advantage of group work time to do other thing that teacher cannot detect and it is difficukt to accurately assess the effectiveness of the group acivity . Without meeting other students, learners will not have the oppotunity to talk and grow mentally.

In conclusion, distance – education still has fatal disadvantages for the education system of countries so I suppose that the traditional classroom should be maintained.

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