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Once there was a dog who managed to steal a piece of bread from a butcher shop. He was in a bid to find a safer place, where he can sit and gnawl the piece of bread. While he trotting on the bridge over the stream, he happened to see his own reflection down the water/stream, and he was happy to see another dog in the water with the thought of he can steal that piece of bread also. He suddenly jumped down the stream and in order to grab the other piece, he widened the mouth, so the piece which was in his mouth fell down and went deep inside the water. Finally, the dog climbed up the bridge with nothing.

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User_garyOnce there was a dog who managed to steal a piece of bread from a butcher's shop [Butchers sell meat; bakers sell bread.]. He was in a bid set out to find a safer place, where he can sit and gnawl the piece of bread. While he trotting across the bridge over the stream, he happened to see his own reflection down in the water/stream. and he was happy to see Seeing another dog in the water with a piece of bread in its mouth, with the he thought of he can he could/might steal that piece of bread also. He suddenly jumped down into the stream and in order to grab the other piece, he widened opened his the mouth wide , so the piece which was in his mouth fell down and went deep inside into/under the water. Finally, the dog climbed up back onto the bridge with nothing.

Please correct my sentences.
Not bad - you have work to do on prepositions still.

What was the moral of the story?
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Very good.
Thank you Feebs11


What was the moral of the story?
I know moral of the story, but I couldn't able to express it properly. Maybe...........Greediness ends in the desperate situation.

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Beware lest you lose the substance by grasping at the shadow.

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Don't be greedy
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