Topic: Write an essay about the main problems teenagers have in your country. Describe them, and explain their causes and suggest possible solutions.

220-260 words.

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Being a teenager on Ukraine is tough experience, especially in small cities. Undoubtedly, there are innumerable problems to describe.


To begin with, youngsters don't have an opportunity to study subjects, which they prefer. For example, all pupils need to study physics, chemistry, biology etc. This way, they have to gain knowledge, which they wouldn't use in the future. Furthermore, the education system in Ukraine quite poor, because of the old studying program. As a result, children are dread of numerous tests and exams. In my opinion, lessons should be more interactive with using modern technologies like interactive whiteboards, computers, 3D printers, also, lessons should be packed with children communication to tackle different exercises and discussions.


The second serious drawback of teens life in Ukraine bis motivation of doing sports. For example, youngsters prefer surfing on the net, rather than going to play basketball, football, volleyball etc. I think, in Ukraine sport opportunities are developed on high level, but teenagers are side tracked on social networks, that distract them from being fit and healthy. Furthermore, many teenagers shirk when PE teacher asked them to do push ups or other sport exercises. As a result, teens protest against doing sports and wilfully consider doing sports like dull and trifling.


All things considered, there are many problems in teenagers life in Ukraine. After all mentioned, I hope things will go better.

Hi there, here's my opinion essay.

Topic:

Teenagers in your country. Write an essay about the main problems teenagers have in your country. Describe them, and explain their causes and suggest possible solution. 220-260 words


Being a teenager on Ukraine is tough experience, especially in small cities. Undoubtedly, there are innumerable problems to describe.

To begin with, youngsters don't have an opportunity to study subjects, which they prefer. For example, all pupils need to study physics, chemistry, biology etc. This way, they have to gain knowledge, which they wouldn't use in the future. Furthermore, the education system in Ukraine quite poor, because of the old studying program. As a result, children are dread of numerous tests and exams. In my opinion, lessons should be more interactive with using modern technologies like interactive whiteboards, computers, 3D printers, also, lessons should be packed with children communication to tackle different exercises and discussions.

The second serious drawback of teens life in Ukraine bis motivation of doing sports. For example, youngsters prefer surfing on the net, rather than going to play basketball, football, volleyball etc. I think, in Ukraine sport opportunities are developed on high level, but teenagers are side tracked on social networks, that distract them from being fit and healthy. Furthermore, many teenagers shirk when PE teacher asked them to do push ups or other sport exercises. As a result, teens protest against doing sports and wilfully consider doing sports like dull and trifling.

All things considered, there are many problems in teenagers life in Ukraine. After all mentioned, I hope things will go better.

Being a teenager in Ukraine is tough experience, especially in small cities. Undoubtedly, There are innumerable problems to pick from to describe.


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The second serious drawback of teens' life in Ukraine bis (That makes no sense.) motivation of doing sports. For example, youngsters prefer surfing on the net, rather than playing going to play basketball, football, volleyball etc. I think, in Ukraine sport opportunities are widely available, developed on high level, but teenagers are side tracked on social networks, that distract them from being fit and healthy. Furthermore, many teenagers shirk when PE teachers ask asked them to do push ups or other sport physical exercises. As a result, teens protest against doing sports and wilfully consider doing sports like dull and trifling.


All things considered, there are many problems for teenagers life in Ukraine. After all mentioned, I hope things will go better.


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Savage38Describe them, and explain their causes and suggest possible solutions.

You did not suggest any solutions. "In my opinion" is not a solution proposal.

Learn the difference between pupils and students.