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Thnks
My light-brown table placed at opposite side of bed, lift my intelligent computer system. Heavy white monitor, with gray protected shield, lies at top surface of table. Merely below there is soft, easy to press keyboard held. Carry several grouped square keys.The moving hand of my desktop screen, mouse, quietly lied over black sponge pad, next to keyboard. Tow audio speakers stand at both sides of monitor like a guard. Down shelve the master mind CPU stand with complicated integrated systems. In front of table I see a small round stool, lied on my livid carpet.

Thnks
My light-brown table placed at opposite side of bed, lift my intelligent computer system. Heavy white monitor, with gray protected shield, lies at top surface of table. Merely below there is soft, easy to press keyboard held. Carry several grouped square keys.The moving hand of my desktop screen, mouse, quietly lied over black sponge pad, next to keyboard. Tow audio speakers stand at both sides of monitor like a guard. Down shelve the master mind CPU stand with complicated integrated systems. In front of table I see a small round stool, lied on my livid carpet.
Comments (Page 4)
Do suggest me some adjectives as beside of weak grammar, I am unfamiliar with several words of English as well.
I know my sentences lacks only one thing. And that’s "Charm".
So I need help as much as I can get from you guys!
And please tell me some sites where I can get words easily but still online dictionaries search for words we type in.
Any how trying is better then nothing
I appreciate your opinion as I know this sentence is so un-natural or made up.
Speaking from experience, I can assure you, as long as you maintain a strong learning desire and a tireless attitude, your English will improve with time. Exposure to natural English by reading and watching informative television programs definitely help develop a stronger vocabulary. Practicing words you learned in forums such as this one will allow you to learn from the experts and help you to get a feel how to use certain words. I am not just saying this. I know exactly how you feel because I had been there myself.
<<>>I know my sentences lacks only one thing. And that’s "Charm".I think the word is "finesse"
<<>>And please tell me some sites where I can get words easily but still online dictionaries search for words we type in New words can be found everywhere if you pay attention to them. They are in magazine or newspaper articles, on TV newscast and dialogs. The only limitation to learning new words is the capacity of our minds.
Yeah surely some day i will be writer , only if i dont use much English words
Ok i will keep your advice in mind and keep my mind OPEN
Thanks once again for cheering me up
Thanks !
The computer lies over the wooden table against the mid-wall of my room. Its gradual help in my studies supported me like caretaker. Usually my spelling and grammar are being formatted by this apparently called the machine. The monitor holding gray shield is lying on the top of table, with some sack of books and a cd stand beside it. Just below I see easy-to-press keyboard having soft sound keys on it. Along with it goes mouse, the rolling hand of my desktop screen, smoothly lies on top of black sponge pad[non-essential clause]. A two audios speaker stands at each side of monitor like balmy trees on lake side. All these twine [or use blend] by the central nerve centre CPU, which stands at lower shelf of table and control the whole system like a captain of the ship. In front of the table I see a small round stool resting over my bright carpet's side line.
Thanks!
The computer lies over the wooden table against the mid-wall of my room. Its gradual help in my studies supported me like caretaker. Usually my spelling and grammar are being formatted by this apparently called the machine. The monitor holding gray shield is lying on the top of table, with some sack of books and a cd stand beside it. Just below I see easy-to-press keyboard having soft sound keys on it. Along with it goes mouse, the rolling hand of my desktop screen, smoothly lies on top of black sponge pad[non-essential clause]. A two audios speaker stands at each side of monitor like balmy trees on lake side. All these twine [or use blend] by the central nerve centre CPU, which stands at lower shelf of table and control the whole system like a captain of the ship. In front of the table I see a small round stool resting over my bright carpet's side line.
A rolling hang, balmy trees, a lake side, central nerve center, and a ship captain -- too many!
Here are some problem phrases, and you need to find new ways to say them: mid-wall, apparently called the machine, monitor holding gray shield, rolling had of my desktop screen, a two, side line.
You also are having trouble with articles.
Well yes I used so many metaphors to discover new ones. Can you point out beside of "A two audio speakers", where i use wrong articles? The word apprently i use to say that people see computer as machine but infact its like a home teacher or supporter. In this sense i use apparently , now tell me its still incorrect? Ok then what about allegedly word instead of apparently?
And about side line word, carpet's outer rim or outer edge would be appropriate in sense there?
I don't know what should i use instead of rolling hand as mouse rolls on screen. Should i put sensitive or clicking mouse or like this.
Please GG, explain in detail as i know i have mistakes but please high light them and tell me how to correct or just improvement suggestions.
And also tell me, grammartical mistakes as well and the word i used in 2nd line Caretaker is ok ?
Thanks
GG i am not pressuring only you to answer my posts. You are not ordered to answer but its my way of talking to people, to continue with people who answer me first. If someone like to answer, answer without pressure. I am requesting to all members out there who are reading my post.
Please Reply My POSTS !
I guess nobody dares to go through your 4 page long thread and then answers your endless questions. I suggest you break your writing into smaller pieces and post them as individual posts. That way, those who are willing to help do not have to spend a lot of time going through your long writing and most probably you'll get better and effective answers. I owuld like to help but like I said, I don't even dare to continue where I left off, which is in the first page I believe.
No offense. Ignore my comment if you don't agree with my opinion.