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That traffic congestion becomes a serious issue in big cities in the modern day is obvious. The initial reason is that there are mass migrations from rural areas to suburban areas. This is because not only is life in center cities more convenient and comfortable but there are also a variety of opportunities in employment, medical, and education. As a result, people in the countryside tend to commute to big cities to catch better chances and gain more experiences. Another factor is that in Vietnam, the public transport system is not enhanced enough to meet residents’ demands. A good example is that in my home country, in a 4-member family, people would afford at least three motorcycles to travel to work or school. Consequently, personal vehicles are of prominence, which is the main problem leading to traffic congestion.

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That traffic congestion has become a serious issue in big cities in the modern day is obvious. The initial reason is that there are mass migrations from rural areas to suburban areas. This is because not only is life in center cities more convenient and comfortable but there are also a variety of opportunities in employment, health care medical, and education. As a result, people in the countryside tend to commute (commute means they live in the countryside, but work in the city.) to big cities to catch better chances work. and gain more experiences. Another factor is that in Vietnam, the public transport system is not enhanced (wrong word) adequate enough to meet residents’ the demand. A good example is that in my home country, in a 4-member family, people would have afford at least three motorcycles to travel to work or school. Consequently, personal vehicles are very commonplace of prominence, which is the main problem leading to traffic congestion.