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Is this paragraph free from mistakes:


"I've always liked walking.

It's a habit I've picked up since I was a child.

I would rather walk than wait for the bus.

I didn't like riding the bus. I've never liked much riding the bus"

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Christine ChristieI've always liked walking.

Good.

Christine ChristieIt's a habit I've picked up since I was a child.

You can only pick up a habit once. "It's a habit I picked up when I was a child."

Christine ChristieI would rather walk than wait for the bus.

Me, too.

Christine ChristieI didn't like riding the bus.

Good.

Christine ChristieI've never liked much riding the bus"

Wrong order. "I've never much liked riding the bus." or I've never liked riding the bus much."