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My light-brown table placed at opposite side of bed, lift my intelligent computer system. Heavy white monitor, with gray protected shield, lies at top surface of table. Merely below there is soft, easy to press keyboard held. Carry several grouped square keys.The moving hand of my desktop screen, mouse, quietly lied over black sponge pad, next to keyboard. Tow audio speakers stand at both sides of monitor like a guard. Down shelve the master mind CPU stand with complicated integrated systems. In front of table I see a small round stool, lied on my livid carpet.
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Please guys check my paragraph for improvements and errors !

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My light-brown table placed at opposite side of the bed, lift (lifts?)my intelligent computer system. A heavy white monitor, with a gray protected shield, lies at top surface of the table. Merely below there is a soft, easy-to-press keyboard held. Carry several grouped square keys (incomplete).The moving hand of my desktop screen, mouse, quietly lied over black sponge pad, next to the keyboard. Two audio speakers stand at both sides of the monitor like guards. Down shelve (shelves?) the master mind CPU stand (why stand?) with complicated integrated systems. In front of (the) table I see a small round stool, lied on my livid carpet.
My light-brown table placed on at the opposite side of the bed, lifts (lifts?)my intelligent computer system.
A heavy white monitor, with a gray protected shield, lies at on top surface of the table.
Merely Just below there is a soft, easy-to-press keyboard held , (with Carry several grouped square keys (incomplete).) - with several square keys grouped (together) on it.

The moving hand of my desktop screen, mouse, quietly lied over black sponge pad, next to the keyboard. - The mouse lies quietly on a black sponge pad next to the keyboard.
Two audio speakers stand at either both sides of the monitor like guards.
Down shelve (shelves?) the master mind CPU stand (why stand?) with complicated integrated systems. - Down on the shelf stands the nerve centr, the CPU with its' complicated integrated systems.

In front of (the) table I see a small round stool, lied on my livid carpet. - In front of the table I see a small, round stool, placed/lying on my bright carpet.
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Thanks guyz for pointing out errors i made. Well do you have any suggestions to improve my paragraph? its seem so cruel and materialistic, in other words, i dont see any coherence and softness.
Mr.Optilang, why i cant use both side of monitor ? as speakers stand at left and right of monitor.
Instead of Stand what word would be appropriate as my words repeating without any effective meaning. PLz Help to use some concert words.
Cute, why don't you repost the paragraph with the suggestions you've received. It would be easier to provide further comments if we could see a complete picture.
Okay I'm writing after suggestions I have received. Emotion: smile

My light-brown table placed on the opposite side of the bed, lifts my intelligent computer system. A heavy white monitor, with a gray protected shield, lies on top of the table. Just below there is a soft [can I add here the word sound?], easy-to-press keyboard, with several square keys grouped together on it. The moving hand of my desktop screen, mouse, quietly lied over black sponge pad, next to the keyboard [Please tell me why I can’t write like this]. [Suggested sentence] The mouse lies quietly on a black sponge pad next to the keyboard. Two audio speakers stand at both side [suggested word is either, could u explain it] of monitor like guards. Down on the shelf stands the nerve centre, the CPU with its' complicated integrated systems. In front of the table, I see a small, round [can i use word "fragile" instead of round?], lying on my bright carpet.

Now Grammar Geek, help me to improve it, to get some softness. Should I add more adjectives modifiers or what? Please suggest in detail.
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Heaven knows it does not need more adjectives.

moving hand of my desktop screen, The mouse, quietly lies over the/a black sponge pad, next to the keyboard [Please tell me why I can’t write like this].

[Suggested sentence] The mouse lies quietly on a black sponge pad next to the keyboard.

This image of the "moving hand" doesn't make sense. Mouse needs an article and it needs a verb.Don't seperate a subject from its verb. Sponge pad also needs and article.

Two audio speakers stand at both side [suggested word is either, could u explain it]

Two speakers at both sides means four speakers in all. A speaker stands at each side means two speakers, ONE on each side.

My light-brown table placed on the opposite side opposite side of the bed from what? of the bed,Don't seperate the subject from its verb lifts wrong word- supports, or holds my intelligent computer system. A heavy white monitor, with a gray protected shield, lies on top of the table. Just below there is a soft [can I add here the word sound? yes - what did you have in mind?], easy-to-press keyboard, with several square keys grouped together on it keyboards usually have keys. Is there something unique about these keys? . The moving hand of my desktop screen, mouse, quietly lied over black sponge pad, next to the keyboard [Please tell me why I can’t write like this]. [Suggested sentence] The mouse lies quietly on a black sponge pad next to the keyboard. Two a audio speakers stands at either side of flank try this word instead the monitor like guards. Down on the shelf stands the nerve centre, the CPU with its' its is the possessive; it's is the contracted form of it is; its' doesn't exist complicated integrated systems. In front of the table, I see a small, round [can i use word "fragile" instead of round? You can use the word fragile, but it's not a similar word -- what is the missing noun? A round and/or fragile WHAT?], again, dont' sepearte the subject from teh verb lying on my bright carpet.
Try to think of a giant metaphor for the whole thing. The part about the guards is great- but it doesn't match the rest of the imagery. It is a sleeping giant? Small in size, but powerful in nature? Try to think of how each piece fits in with the entire metaphor.

Hello Grammar Geek, thanks for helping me here!

Well I don’t understand the previous post. Giant size, are you saying about speaker size I should emphasis for metaphor?

My light-brown table placed on the opposite side opposite side of the bed from what? of the bed,Don't seperate the subject from its verb lifts wrong word- supports, or holds my intelligent computer system.

My light brown table supports the intelligent computer system at the opposite side of bed.

NOW the sentence agree with subject and verb? Is any thing u can suggest me to make this sentence attractive ?

Sorry at the end sentence, I forgot to add noun "Stool", I see a small, round [can i use word "fragile" instead of round here?] stool, lying on my bright carpet.

Also I want to know, in non essential clauses, subject is separated from verb. Why is that?
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