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Fortunately in this regard, we have the guidance of our own educational heritage. In the history of the subcontinent, such personalities as Hazrat Shah Wali ul Lah have a great deal of work on this subject. Shah Sahib's modest literary work teaches us the etiquette of dissent. In order to meet the challenges of intellectual well-being in his time, Shah Sahib introduced several revisionist angles of thought as well as revival of the intellectual tradition of dissociation, which shaped his personality as a great global thinker.

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Fortunately in this regard, we have the guidance of our own historical sages. educational heritage. In the history of the subcontinent, such renown personalities as Hazrat Shah Wali ul Lah have a great deal of work to say on this subject. Shah Sahib's modest literary work teaches us the etiquette of dissent. In order to meet the challenges of intellectual well-being in his time, Shah Sahib became a revisionist, thoughtfully reexamining and critiquing traditionally long-held accounts of historical events and moral precepts. introduced several revisionist angles of thought as well as revival of the intellectual tradition of dissociation, (That is a mental disorder. I am not sure what you mean. Maybe this: He separated himself from his peers and led a life of quiet seclusion and contemplation, ) which shaped his personality as a great global thinker.

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Fortunately in this regard, we have the guidance of our own historical sages. In the history of the subcontinent, such renown personalities as Hazrat Shah Wali ul Lah have a great deal to say on this subject. Shah Sahib's modest literary work teaches us the etiquette of dissent. In order to meet the challenges of intellectual well-being in his time, Shah Sahib became a revisionist, thoughtfully re-examining and critiquing traditionally long-held accounts of historical events and moral precepts which shaped his personality as a great global thinker.