Hi, i was wondering can some please correct my paragraph I wanted to make sure if all my grammer are correct. Thanks you very much! for those who correct my paragraph.
We lived in a world today where dogs and cats are our best friends we raised them as our pet because we enjoyed having them around they are playful, cuddle, and cute. There are times when we feel very depressed, and when these animal are around it usually brighten up my day it’s make us feel happy to be around them each and every single day, yet we lived in a world where there are too many cats and dogs roaming the street. When these animals are caught and brought into public shelters they are usually euthanized within a few days and is sad to see so many healthy dogs, cats, puppies and kittens have to be put to sleep each year in public shelters due to lack of responsible homes. I personality feel that it’s wrong to do such a thing, but when it come to overpopulation of animals in the world we must do something to control the population without that, the cities will be filled with animals running all around, the place will be a messed and complete chaos. There’s are way that we can cut back on the euthanasia of healthy animals one is when the dog or cat is completely one hundred percents healthy and active they shouldn’t be put to sleep they should be put up for adoption. Other than that if the dog or cat have reached it old age or if they are known to be aggressive than they should be put to sleep. Putting animal to sleep may be a wrong thing to do, but it can help reduce overpopulation of animal around the world. That is why we have to spayed or neutered or animals.
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We lived in a world today where dogs and cats are our best friends we raised them as our pet because we enjoyed having them around they are playful, cuddle, and cute. There are times when we feel very depressed, and when these animal are around it usually brighten up my day it’s make us feel happy to be around them each and every single day, yet we lived in a world where there are too many cats and dogs roaming the street. When these animals are caught and brought into public shelters they are usually euthanized within a few days and is sad to see so many healthy dogs, cats, puppies and kittens have to be put to sleep each year in public shelters due to lack of responsible homes. I personality feel that it’s wrong to do such a thing, but when it come to overpopulation of animals in the world we must do something to control the population without that, the cities will be filled with animals running all around, the place will be a messed and complete chaos. There’s are way that we can cut back on the euthanasia of healthy animals one is when the dog or cat is completely one hundred percents healthy and active they shouldn’t be put to sleep they should be put up for adoption. Other than that if the dog or cat have reached it old age or if they are known to be aggressive than they should be put to sleep. Putting animal to sleep may be a wrong thing to do, but it can help reduce overpopulation of animal around the world. That is why we have to spayed or neutered or animals.
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