" Last weekend, I was looking after my little daughter and so we decided to go for a walk. That's how I run into an old schoolfriend. She told me that she setted up a new business. She told me that it was hard to manage and that she was always run down at the end of the day. That's why she had post-poned all her family meeting and had turned down all her friends' invitations. She was considering giving off her work. I backed her up telling her that she shouldn't give up so quickly and that she sould look for an assistant to help her. I also told her that she took after her mom in ambition and hardwork. That made her laugh. She asked me to root for her so that she can keep up her work. At the end of the discussion, she was persued and was looking forward to having an assistant! I was cheered up to see her so determinated! "

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Last weekend, I was looking after my little daughter and so we decided to go for a walk. That's how I ran into an old schoolfriend. She told me that she had set up a new business. She told me that it was hard to manage and that she was always run down at the end of the day. That's why she had post-poned all of her family meetings and had turned down all her friends' invitations. She was considering giving up her work. I backed her up, telling her that she shouldn't give up so quickly and that she should look for an assistant to help her. I also told her that she took after her mom in ambition and hard work. That made her laugh. She asked me to root for her so that she can keep up her work. At the end of the discussion, she was persuaded and was looking forward to having an assistant! I was cheered up to see her so determined! "