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I would like it to sound biblical and spirtual, if you find any mistakes kindly let me know. thanks for helping


1. I'm a tiny mosquito from below, you say, "well whatever"

2. But in your heart there is the demon from the forest and he is in front of you


3. How he paces between light and madness

4. putting delicately on the heads of the crowd

Question

4. it's better writing "placing" than "putting"? it's in a 'biblical' language:)

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