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Dear sir,
Is the sentence below properly constructed?
Textile linear density at spinning can be determined only when its intended per square metre weight is given.
I'm trying to express my opinion to my customer base on the detail below:
1. textile factory operators are about to start their work on spinning machine.
2. they need to adjust the linear density in order to produce the product that is to meet customer's demand.
3. linear density can be figure out only when the per-square-metre weight of the intended product is known.
Your advice will be very much appreciated!
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linear density is not expressed per square meter, but per meter
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Thank you!