Hello all,

First of all, i would like to thank everyone who have good posts on this forum. It helps me a lot when I learn English.
I am now writting a PhD. Cover Letter. I would highly appreciate any help to improve it.
Please help! I am not good at writting .

Thank you in advance.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

On recommendation of Prof. Dr. XXXXX, University of XXXXXXXX, I am writing to apply for the PhD. Student position at XXXXXX. I have enclosed a completed resume for your review.

My name is Quan Nguyen, a fresh graduate from University of XXXXXXX In March 2007, I hold the Master degree in Communication and Media Engineering. During my last academic year, I had a chance to do my internship and master thesis in XXXX company. There I developed not only my knowledges in web development but also real working experiences in an international environment. My thesis is related to the issues in Business Intelligent and Web 2.0. I obtained skills in J2EE programming and advanced web technologies for Enterprise Applications including Jboss, Portal/Portlet, Ajax, Web services,etc.. It was a great experience for me, which has focused my interests on the topic of Web 2.0 technologies.

After my graduation, I worked as a PHP developer for XXXX, an IT and business consulting company. I gained further experiences in web programming, project management and team-working.

As well as my good understanding of academic principles, I am a very motivated, hardworking and effective individual. Throughout my career, I obtained a good communication and organizational skills. It makes me confident that I will be suitable for your research team.

For my future career, I see this PhD program as the way to broaden my knowledges in designing and implementing Enterprise Distributed Applications, as well as how to apply these applications in business, which SAP is now the best solution. This program proposes areas of research that match my interests, such as Business Process Management and Semantic Web Technologies. I have no doubt in mind that I have enough knowledges, skills and competence to pursue the PhD program in your research center.

I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss how I may be suitable for this position. I am now on vacation in Vietnam, but can be reached at any time via email or telephone at number .

Thank you very much for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Quan Nguyen

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Hello all,

First of all, i would like to thank everyone who have good posts on this forum. It helps me a lot when I learn English.
I am now writting a PhD. Cover Letter. I would highly appreciate any help to improve it.
Please help! I am not good at writting .

Thank you in advance.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

On recommendation of Prof. Dr. XXXXX, University of XXXXXXXX, I am writing to you in order to apply for the PhDtthe PhD-program you are offering. Student position at XXXXXX. I have enclosed a completed resume for your review.

My name is Quan Nguyen, a fresh graduate from University of XXXXXXX [Please don't introduce yourselve in a formal letter, it is very unprofessional. Besides, your resume is enclosed.] In March 2007, I hold got the Master degree in Communication and Media Engineering. During my last academic year, I had a chance to do an my internship and master thesis in the XXXX company. There I gained profound developed not only my knowledges in web development but also real as well as working experiences in an international environment. My thesis is related to the issues in Business Intelligent and Web 2.0. I obtained skills in J2EE programming and advanced web technologies for Enterprise Applications including Jboss, Portal/Portlet, Ajax, Web services,etc.. It was a great experience for me, which has focused my interests on the topic of Web 2.0 technologies.

After my graduation, I worked as a PHP developer for XXXX, an IT and business consulting company. I gained further experiences in web programming, project management and team-working.

As well as my good understanding of academic principles, I am a very motivated, hardworking and effective individual. Throughout my career, I obtained a good communication and organizational skills. It makes me confident that I will be suitable for your research team.

For my future career, I see this PhD program as the way to broaden my knowledges in designing and implementing Enterprise Distributed Applications, as well as how to apply these applications use them in business, which in the case that SAP is now the best solution. This Your program proposes covers areas of research that match my interests, such as Business Process Management and Semantic Web Technologies. I have no doubt in mind that I have enough knowledges, skills and competence to pursue the PhD program in your research center.

I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss how I may be suitable for this position. I am now on vacation in Vietnam, but can be reached at any time via email or telephone at number .[Your contact data should be in the resume and every person in the business wourld know how to reach an other person. If your contact data are not on the resume, you should put it there and don't write about it. Again, it looks very unprofessional, sorry, if I am too hard by trying to help]

Thank you very much for your time an your consideration. My resume is enclosed. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Quan Nguyen
I am so grateful to you for your correction.

it is actually very unprofessional. I will rewrite it now.

Thanks !
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hello all
I am Rahman need a PhD. Cover Letter. i wuold like to write to Professor who is a VLSI reseacher. I would highly appreciate any help , i also mentioned my personal as well as  academic information in this regard. 

Please help! I am not good at writting.

Md. ********* Rahman
Lecturer

Department of Computer Science and Engineering

************ Science and Technology University
***********
  • Interest :
  • VLSI Design, Programming, VLSI Design, Distributed system, Networking and Graphics.
  • Doing a research on Multiple-Valued logic minimization and realization of Multiple-Valued Flip-Flops, Multiple-Valued Full Adder, Multiple-Valued Subtractor, as well as Multiple-Valued ALU. 
  • 7 journal and conference Publications On VLSI fields 
   Academic records:
  •              7th position in MS in computer science and engineering from ******** University 
  •              14th position in MS in computer science and engineering from ******** University  
thesis Topic: "Minimization of Multivalued Logic"
Thank you in advance.

kindly help me to correct the covering letter.i will be thankful to u

Respected,
Prof. ****

I am Ramesh , writing this letter on recomondation of Prof ***to explore the possibility of finding a suitable doctoral position in your esteemed research group. I have completed my master degree with specialisation in organic chemistry from Department of Chemistry, of ***, in June 2009.

I have been working as a project assistant under the guidance of Prof ***, Professor, Department of Chemistry, , from the past six months. My research work titles "Studies towards the total synthesis of Brassinolide’’. Wittig olefination followed by Claisen rearrangement protocol is key step in our scheme. My other Synthetic targets are Shikimic acid and Oseltamivir.

During my project I have handled the reactions like stable and unstable Wittig reactions, Ozonolysis, reduction reactions by LAH, oxidative cleavage by using sodium tetraiodate and I have prepared various reagents such as PCC, alkoxide bases successfully.

I have qualified in various national level exams like CSIR NET exam. I have 98.73% in GATE 2009.I scored 87 in TOEFL IBT test.

I am keenly interested and highly motivated in the field of Organic Chemistry, Developements of newer synthetic methodologies, Synthesis of Natural Products of biological interests. I have attended International conference on ‘Emerging trends in Chemistry’ Conducted by Department of Chemistry, . Your talk on ‘Catalysis as the Core Technology towards the Development of Sustainable Chemical Processes’ was very impressive. I was also lucky enough to have a discussion with you. Having carefully observed your ongoing research I believe that getting an opportunity to work under your able guidance will be a rewarding experience for my research career I am confident that my training, academic background & research experience would make me a worthwhile contribution to your research program.

I am here with enclosing my curriculum vitae for your kind consideration. I shall be happy to provide any additional information that may be required. I hope my application will get a positive response. I am enthusiastically waiting for your most favourable reply



Yours sincerely,
Ramesh

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