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Is this sentence correct:


"I've been at the counters of some public places and seen that employees engaged in social media."

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Try: I've often not been attended to in shops, government departments, banks, etc. because the workers there were busy on Facebook and the like.

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The parts in bold are unclear. What do you mean by them?

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By this, I mean that sometimes I've been, for instance, at public departments, shops, etc, and I wasn't immediately attended to because the clerks/employees were more focused on Facebook, or other social media websites.

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