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Is it ok to use it like this?

If you have any comments, please, write them. I think my word order is not OK.

To fully succeed in these days it is above all necessary to offer a pinch of personality, as well.

Thank you
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pinch: a bit, a small dose of

Perhaps:

To fully succeed these days it is highly recommended to offer a pinch of personality, as well.

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http://www.suite101.com/article.cfm/motorcycles_adventure/113682

Characters like John (One Eye) Thompson, Shorty Harris, Countess
Morajeski and Death Valley Scotty each added a savory pinch of
personality
to the area's frontier quality.
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Thank you very much. It sounds good.