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Could you please correct this paragraph?

....During this period of time( I mean the Renaissance) , the modern world was born as Gutenberg perfected printing, Christopher Columbus discovered the Americas, Copernicus found that the earth revolved around the sun, Martin Luther founded a new religion, the use of the cannon ended chivalry, da Vinci created a new form of art and Shakespeare is no exception, he is referred to as a Renaissance writer, specifically an Elizabethan poet and playwright. Through his works he displays the Renaissance’s thoughts and concerns, especially his tragedy Hamlet.

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....During this period of time( I mean the Renaissance) , the modern world was born as Gutenberg perfected printing, Christopher Columbus discovered the Americas, Copernicus found that the earth revolved around the sun, Martin Luther founded a new religion, the use of the cannon ended chivalry, da Vinci created a new form of art and Shakespeare is no exception, he is referred to as a Renaissance writer, specifically an Elizabethan poet and playwright. Through his works he displays the Renaissance’s thoughts and concerns, especially his tragedy Hamlet.

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eg ....During this period of time( I mean the Renaissance) , the modern world was born as Gutenberg perfected printing, Christopher Columbus discovered the Americas, Copernicus found that the earth revolved around the sun, Martin Luther founded a new religion, the use of the cannon ended chivalry, and da Vinci created a new form of art. Shakespeare, too, was a part of this movement. He is considered a Renaissance writer as well as an Elizabethan poet and playwright. Through his works he displays the Renaissance’s thoughts and concerns, especially in his tragedy Hamlet.

Clive
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