Dear Mr or Madam,

I am writing to you to express my interest and motivation in completing a three-to-four month summer internship in your company. I am interested in a purchasing or supply chain management position with your firm because XXXX has established a worldwide reputation in XXXXXXX. My ability to contribute to your projects and desire to learn from this experience make me an enthusiastic applicant.

As you will see from my resume I am a second-year student at the Ecole des XXXX, Top French engineering school (Broad-based and general studies with a strong emphasis on scientific disciplines, and continuous education programs for managers). I will specialize myself in 3rd year in quality with a double competence in logistics and purchasing. As an intern in XXXX-Construction, I learned the importance of a work well done, as well as how to develop a positive working relationship with the clients. While working as site manager assistant I managed the financial and material flows of the site.

I enjoy working with others towards a common goal and I am effective in team situations. I have sought out opportunities to work on worthwhile projects throughout my time at the Ecole des XXXX. My experiences demonstrate my ability to contribute and produce as a team-player, qualities that would enable me to add value to your company. I am therefore very excited in becoming an intern in your company and pursue my wish of discovering The USA and its way of life.

My enclosed resume provides additional details about my experience and skills.

It would be a pleasure to discuss with you further your desired qualities for this position. Please do not hesitate to contact me at 00 336 XXXXXXX or at Email Removed">Email Removed, if I may answer any additional questions for you. I will follow-up with you in the near future to discuss the opportunity. In the meantime, thank you for your consideration. I look forward to talking with you soon.

Sincerely,

xxxxxx

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Hi ! I'm a French student and i wrote this covering letter to find an internship but I'm sure there is many mistakes.

So if someone can help me it will be wonderfull.

Thanks in advance

Jib
Hello Jib,

I split this off and deleted the poll, since you wanted a post and not a poll. Good luck.

Dear Sir or Madam, - Make EVERY effort to find out who will be reading this and address that person by name.

I am writing to you to express my interest and motivation in completing a three-to-four month summer internship in your company in I am interested in a purchasing or supply-chain management position. I am particularly interested in working for your firm because XXXX has established a worldwide reputation in XXXXXXX. My ability to contribute to your projects and desire to learn from this experience make me an enthusiastic applicant.

As you will see from my resume, I am a second-year student at the Ecole des XXXX, a top engineering school in France. So far, I have taken broad-based and general studies with a strong emphasis on scientific disciplines, and continuous education programs for managers - I don't understand this one. However, next year, I will specialize in quality, with a double competence (do you mean a double major?) in logistics and purchasing. (When? Last year?), as an intern at XXXX-Construction, I learned the importance of a job well done, as well as how to develop a positive working relationship with clients. While working as the site manager's assistant, I managed the financial and material flows of the site.

I have sought out opportunities to work on worthwhile projects throughout my time at the Ecole des XXXX. My experience has helped me develop and demonstrate my ability to contribute as a team member and I enjoy working with others towards a common goal, qualities that would enable me to add value to your company. I am excited about the propsect of becoming an intern in your company and pursuing my dream to live in and learn more about the United States.

My resume is enclosed. It would be a pleasure to discuss my background and what you are looking for in a candiate for this position. Please do not hesitate to contact me at 00 336 XXXXXXX or at Email Removed">Email Removed, if I may answer any additional questions for you. I will follow-up with you in the near future to discuss the opportunity. In the meantime, thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,

xxxxxx
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Thank you for your quick answer and your help
I corrected the letter :

Dear Mr. John

I am writing to express my interest in completing a summer internship in your company in a purchasing or supply chain management position. I am particularly interested in working for your firm because XXXX has established a worldwide reputation in XXXXXXX. My ability to contribute to your projects and desire to learn from this experience make me an enthusiastic applicant.

As you will see from my resume, I am a second-year student at the Ecole des ***, a top engineering school in France. So far, I have taken broad-based and general studies with a strong emphasis on scientific and management disciplines. However, next year, I will specialize in quality, with a double major in logistics and purchasing. Last year as an intern at ***-Construction, I learned the importance of a job well done, as well as how to develop a positive working relationship with clients. While working as the site manager's assistant, I managed the accounts and the material flows of the site.

I have sought out opportunities to work on projects throughout my time at the Ecole des ***. My experience has helped me develop and demonstrate my ability to contribute as a team member and I enjoy working with others towards a common goal, (maybe it’s too long) qualities that would enable me to add value to your company. I am excited about the prospect of becoming an intern in your company and pursuing my dream to live in and learn more about the United States.

My resume is enclosed. It would be a pleasure to discuss my background and what you are looking for in a candidate for this position. Please do not hesitate to contact me at 00 336 *** or at ***@***.fr, if I may answer any additional questions for you. I will follow-up with you in the near future to discuss the opportunity. In the meantime, thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon.



Sincerely,
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Jib, it looks good to me. If you think that one sentence is too long, then cut it. You should trust your instincts on these things.

It would be great if someone else could come by for a proofread. It's hard to find errors when you become too familiar with the content.

Bon chance with the internship!