Hello,

I am Korean and I live now in Seoul. In recently, I write an English letter on behalf of my aquaintance who is musician and have a concert in his own house in Seoul. He has invited pretty many foreign performers to his house and had concerts since 2002.

On January next year a performer who lives in Germany will be coming to Seoul to have a concert. She wants to have a invitation letter for sponsorship in Germany. I have not written that kind of formal letter before. Please just a moment to have a blick on my writing. I think I have several mistakes of grammar and many things. I cannot figure it out by myself. Please help me~

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<The ( )th House Concert>

Date: the 1, on Janary 2007, at 20:00

Place: Seoul

Supervised by composer Mr. Park

Words for invitation

Mr. Park requests the pleasure of Ms. Lei as a performer to the ( )th House Concert in South Korea on 1, January 2007 at 20:00 in Seoul.

The House Concert is held twice a month since July, 2002. In the House Concert people have an opportunity to experience of hearing various genres, such as western classical, contemporary experimental music, Korean music, popular music, independent film and different kinds of performance.
The concert hall in which music is playing is a private house of Mr. Park. In such an intimate space performers and audience could be musicking close to each other, which is very uncommon way of having a concert in South Korea.

The concert on which Lei will be playing is a kind of special concert which takes place once or twice in a year.
On that concert many people would be able to take part in the concert free of charge and listen to contemporary music which is not heard easily in South Korea.

Park
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I'm not sure what you want.

Is it an invitation to attend the concert?

Is it a letter asking German companies to provide sponsorship? (In which case, best written in German really).
Thank you for having an interest :-)

First of all, it's an invitation letter to a performer to attend a concert.

After the performer gets the letter, she would request sponsorship to companies in Germany.
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Hmmm, it's not quite an invitation letter to her, more of an endorsement of her approaching companies for sponsorship.

The ( )th House Concert>

1January 2007 at 20:00

Place: Seoul

Conducted(?) by the composer Mr. Park

Mr. Park has requested that Ms. Lei perform at the ( )th House Concert in South Korea on 1 January 2007 at 20:00 in Seoul.

The venue in which the music will be played is the private house of Mr. Park. In such an intimate space, performers and audience will be enjoying the music close to each other, which is very unusual way of holding a concert in South Korea. The concert in which Lei will be playing is a special concert which takes place only once or twice a year. On these dates many people are able to attend the concert free of charge and listen to contemporary music, which is not heard easily in South Korea.

The House Concert has been held twice a month since July, 2002. In the House Concert, people have an opportunity to experience the arts in genres such as western classical, contemporary experimental music, Korean music, popular music, independent films and other kinds of performance.
I appreciated your reply.

I would first show the letter to the performer, and then we two could talk about it more to get sponsorship, etc.

Thank you anyway. It could be very helpful. Emotion: smile
please i need invitation of letter to coming to suoth korea to do business. thank you
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pleaase i need invitation of letter from you to apply my visa in senegal to coming to germany to do business. thank you
Dear sir

please i am very interest for you company so i went you to to invietend me to come and discues with you . so try to help me invitation of letter to apply my visa here in senegal in Germany exmbeassy .

I have all my documants here in senegal import & export conmmes.

Yours best

john kennedy opoku

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Dear Sir

I am very interestied in working for your company so I wondered if you would invite me to come to an interview to discuss this with you. I need the letter of invitation to apply for my visa with the German embassy herer in Senegal.

I have all my documents here in Senegal (import & export conmmes. - I don't understand this part)

Yours faithfully,

john kennedy opoku
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