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Topic: read the letter below Andy and write back to him giving him advice.



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My letter:

Dear Andy,

I was sorry to hear that you've got problems. Weith gain is a big problem nowadays. It's very important that this doesn't happen. I really hope that you will cope with this problem. So, here are some tips to help you deal with your problem.

I strongly advise you to start work out at the gym or, if this isn't possible, at home. It will help you lose your weight and your clothes will fit you again. However, training shouldn't harm your main job. Also, it's very good that you take after your father, because it will help you don't give up.

If I were in your shoes, i'd find another diet that includes at least a little meat and carbohydrates, because it's really needs in order to cope with your new job normally . Also it is very important that if you decide to work out in the gym, don't use your diet as the body needs energy during exercise, which you can get eating meat and carbohydrates. Meat is really necessary in this case, because it is protein, which your body needs. I think your mom is right and you should need her advice.

Let me know how everything turns out. There's no need to panic. You'll get over it. Good luck!

John


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Topic: read the letter below from Andy and write back to him giving him advice.

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Dear Andy,

Im was sorry to hear that you've got about your problems. Weith Weight gain is a [ 2] major issue for many people big problem nowadays. You’re certainly not alone. It's very important that this doesn't happen. I really hope that you will cope with and hopefully somehow overcome this problem. So, here are some tips to help you deal with it. your problem.

First, I strongly advise you to start resume working out at the gym or, if this isn't possible, at home. It will help you lose your some weight and your clothes will fit you again. However, don’t overdo it, but enjoy it instead. training shouldn't harm your main job. Also, it's very good that you take after your father, because it will help you don't if you’re as strong-willed as him, you won’t give up.

If I were in your shoes, I'd find another diet that includes at least a little meat and some carbohydrates, because those are essential nutrients. it's really needs in order to cope with your new job normally . Also it is very important that if you decide to work out in the gym, don't use your diet starve yourself, as the body needs energy during exercise, which you can get from eating meat and carbohydrates. Meat is really necessary in this case, because it is also gives you protein, which your body needs. I think your mom is right and you should need heed her advice.

Let me know how everything turns out. There's no need to panic. You'll get over it. Good luck!

John

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[ 1]: Pay attention to your spelling. Install an English spell checker in your browser/text editor.

[ 2]: Instead of general words like “big”, “bad” or “thing”, words that are more specific earn you higher marks. Also, instead of repeating words in close proximity (e.g. “problem” here), try to use synonyms.

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