Write about the reasons why you ( or students ) decided to attend your uniersity

When I finished my studying at high school, I chose to attend ULIS, depending on my interest in English and foreign cultures. At first, it was a tough time to adapt to a totally new environment, but after a few months, I felt more comfortable. I also realized that my choice was right because ULIS offers me a lot of good opportunities to develop.

Firstly and most importantly, ULIS, which stands for University of Languages and International Studies, is one of the top universities specializing in linguistic research in Vietnam. The school provides students with variety of majors, which are English, French, Russian, German, Chinese, Japanese, Korean and Arabic, and many types of curriculum, from standard quality to high quality, single degree to dual degree.

Furthermore, ULIS also has many well-qualified lecturers. Most of them are young, enthusiastic and open-minded. Students feel free to share their ideas and thoughts during the class because teachers are like friends and it seems to have no clear gap between them and their students.

Apart from good teachers and education programs, the university also attracts many people by its beautiful campus. Opposite the administration block is a large space with a pool and many trees, which makes the campus look like a pretty park and brings about the feeling of relaxing and composer.

All in all, attending ULIS is my best choice. The reasons are not only about the opportunities in studying with high-quality programs and great teachers, but also the lovely and pretty scene that boosts my mood everyday. I highly recommend ULIS for any pupil who intends to choose linguistic major to study in university.

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First and most important, ULIS, which stands for University of Languages and International Studies, (You should use this spelling the first time you use the acronym, not the second or third.) is one of the top universities specializing in linguistic research in Vietnam. The school provides students with (missing word) variety of majors, which are English, French, Russian, German, Chinese, Japanese, Korean and Arabic, and many types of curriculum, from standard quality to high quality, single degree to dual degree.

Furthermore, ULIS also has many well-qualified lecturers. Most of them are young, enthusiastic and open-minded. Students feel free to share their ideas and thoughts during the class because teachers are like friends and it seems to have (unnatural) no clear gap between them and their students.

Apart from good teachers and education programs, the university also attracts many people by its beautiful campus. Opposite the administration block is a large space with a pool and many trees, which makes the campus look like a pretty park and brings about the feeling of relaxing and composer.

All in all, attending ULIS is my best choice. The reasons are not only about the opportunities in studying with high-quality programs and great teachers, but also the lovely and pretty scene that boosts my mood everyday. I highly recommend ULIS for any pupil who intends to choose linguistic major to study in university.

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When I finished my studying at high school, I chose to attend ULIS (University of Languages and International Studies) because of my interest in English and foreign cultures. At first, I found it hard to get used to a totally new environment, but after a few months, I felt more comfortable. I also realized that my choice was right because ULIS offers me a lot of good opportunities to develop.

First and most important, ULIS is one of the top universities specializing in linguistic research in Vietnam. The school provides students with a variety of majors, such as English, French, Russian, German, Chinese, Japanese, Korean and Arabic, and many types of education programs, from standard quality to high quality, single degree to dual degree.

Furthermore, ULIS also has many well-qualified lecturers. Most of them are young, enthusiastic and open-minded. Students feel free to share their ideas and thoughts during the class because teachers are like friends and there seems to be no clear gap between them and their students.

Apart from good teachers and education programs, the university also attracts many people by its beautiful campus. Opposite the administration block is a large space with a pool and many trees, which makes the campus look like a pretty park and brings about the feeling of relaxing.

All in all, attending ULIS is my best choice. The reasons are not only about the opportunities of studying with high-quality programs and great teachers, but also the lovely and pretty scene that greatly boosts my mood. I highly recommend ULIS to any pupil who intends to choose linguistics major to study in university.

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Students feel free to share their ideas and thoughts during the classes because the teachers are like friends and there seems to be no clear gap between them and their students.

Apart from good teachers and education programs, the university also attracts many people because of its beautiful campus. Opposite the administration block is a large space with a pool and many trees, which makes the campus look like a pretty park and brings about a feeling of relaxation.

All in all, attending ULIS is still my best choice. The reasons are not only about the opportunities of studying with high-quality programs and great teachers, but also its lovely and pretty surroundings that greatly boosts my mood. I highly recommend ULIS to any pupil who intends to choose a linguistics major to study in university.

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