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Writing task 2: Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


Advertising is inextricably linked to companies’ marketing strategies. It results in two distinct opinions in public. Some people think that advertisements have tremendous impacts on our choices, while others say that as advertisements are rampant, we now ignore them. I believe that advertising still influences the public to some degree.


On the one hand, I understand why some people say they no longer pay attention to advertisements. The rapid growth and expansion of commercial make itself gradually become bland and tasteless. Besides, many companies do not truly invest money and effort in creating qualified advertisements, they solely aim to sell products without taking care of customers’ experiences. Therefore, thousands of trivial and meaningless advertisements are produced every day. These advertisements appear all over the place, cause displeasure to users when they enjoy video on social media platforms or music on applications, for instance.


On the other hand, I still believe that we are persuaded to buy products through advertisements. In the competitive market, the commercial seems to be the most effective strategy to approach customers and increase brands’ identity. Furthermore, there are countless ways to advertise these days, one of which is sponsoring celebrities. Hundreds of companies and businesses have sold out after their products appear on famous people’s clips, images, or social media. In addition, the customers tend to purchase goods that are present mainstream or that make great impressions on the public. As a result, companies that have sound campaigns and ahead of the trend still succeed in drawing customers’ attention.


In conclusion, although some people think that advertising no longer affects clients’ choices, I would argue that the public is still attracted by good advertisements.

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Advertising is inextricably linked to companies’ marketing strategies. It results in two distinct opinions in public. (That idea is not logically connected to the previous one.) But some people think that this is an effective strategy; advertisements have tremendous impacts on our choices, while others say that as advertisements are rampant, we now ignore them. I believe that advertising still influences our buying habits the public to some degree.

(Ii is important to have good logical transitions in your essay. I could not find your connection between marketing strategies and the two opinions. I have added a suggestion. Strategy in the first sentence is referenced in the second..)


On the one hand, I understand why some people say they no longer pay attention to advertisements. The rapid growth and expansion of commercial (wrong usage. Commercial is an adjective.) make itself (wrong usage.) gradually become bland and tasteless. Besides, many companies do not truly invest money and effort in creating qualified (wrong word - what is a qualification for an ad?) advertisements, they solely aim to sell products without taking care of customers’ experiences. (This is not related to the topic.) Therefore, thousands of trivial and meaningless (wrong word.) advertisements are produced (Do you mean produced or seen?) every day. These advertisements appear all over the place, cause displeasure to users when they enjoy video on social media platforms or music on applications, for instance.


On the other hand, I still believe that (Do not put your opinion in the body paragraph. The body paragraph is for supporting your opinion, not giving it.) there is considerable evidence that we are still persuaded to buy products through advertisements. In the competitive market, the commercial seems to be the most effective strategy to approach (wrong word ) get new customers and increase brands’ brand recognition identity. Furthermore, there are countless ways to advertise these days, one of which is sponsoring celebrities. Hundreds of companies and businesses have sold out (wrong usage) after their products appear on famous people’s clips, images, or social media. In addition, the customers tend to purchase goods that are present mainstream (wrong phrase) or that make great impressions on the public. As a result, companies that have sound campaigns and keep ahead of popular trends the trend still succeed in drawing customers’ attention.


In conclusion, although some people think that advertising no longer affects our clients’ choices, I would argue that the public is still attracted by good advertisements attract buyers..

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Writing task 2: Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


Advertising is inextricably linked to companies’ marketing strategies. It results in two distinct opinions in public. Some people think that advertisements have tremendous impacts on our choices, while others say that as advertisements are rampant, we now ignore them. I believe that advertising still influences the public to some degree.


On the one hand, I understand why some people say they no longer pay attention to advertisements. The rapid growth and expansion of commercial make itself gradually become bland and tasteless. Besides, many companies do not truly invest money and effort in creating qualified advertisements, they solely aim to sell products without taking care of customers’ experiences. Therefore, thousands of trivial and meaningless advertisements are produced every day. These advertisements appear all over the place, cause displeasure to users when they enjoy video on social media platforms or music on applications, for instance.


On the other hand, I still believe that we are persuaded to buy products through advertisements. In the competitive market, the commercial seems to be the most effective strategy to approach customers and increase brands’ identity. Furthermore, there are countless ways to advertise these days, one of which is sponsoring celebrities. Hundreds of companies and businesses have sold out after their products appear on famous people’s clips, images, or social media. In addition, the customers tend to purchase goods that are present mainstream or that make great impressions on the public. As a result, companies that have sound campaigns and ahead of the trend still succeed in drawing customers’ attention.


In conclusion, although some people think that advertising no longer affects clients’ choices, I would argue that the public is still attracted by good advertisements.

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Advertising is inextricably linked to companies’ marketing strategies. Whereas some people think that this is an effective strategy; advertisements have tremendous impacts on our choices, others say that they are rampant, so we now ignore them. I believe that advertising still influences our buying habits to some degree.


On the one hand, I understand why some people say they no longer pay attention to advertisements. The rapid growth and expansion of the advertising industry make advertisements gradually become bland and tasteless. Besides, many companies do not truly invest money and effort in creating high-quality ads. They solely aim to sell products, so thousands of trivial and nonsense advertisements are published every day. These advertisements appear all over the place, cause displeasure to people, especially when they enjoy video on social media platforms or music on applications, for instance.


On the other hand, there is considerable evidence that we are still persuaded to buy products through advertisements. In the competitive market, advertising seems to be the most effective strategy to get new customers and increase brand recognition. Furthermore, there are countless ways to advertise these days, one of which is sponsoring celebrities. Hundreds of companies and businesses’ sales have skyrocketed when their products have been sold out after appearing on famous people’s clips, images, or social media. In addition, the customers tend to purchase goods that are on-trend or make great impressions on the public. As a result, companies that have sound advertising campaigns and keep ahead of popular trends still succeed in drawing customers’ attention.


In conclusion, although some people think that advertising no longer affects our choices, I would argue that good advertisements attract buyers.


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It is better, but the first paragraph can be improved by a more logical flow.

Advertising is inextricably linked to companies’ marketing strategies. Some people think that it is an effective strategy since advertisements attract more customers and that increases profits. However, others disagree, claiming that people mostly ignore the adverts. I believe that advertising still influences our buying habits to some degree.


On the one hand, I understand why some people say they no longer pay attention to advertisements. With the rapid growth and expansion of the advertising industry, make advertisements have gradually become bland and tasteless. Besides, many companies do not truly invest money and effort in creating high-quality ads. They solely aim to flood the market with their messages, sell products, so thousands of trivial and nonsense advertisements are published every day. These advertisements appear all over the place, cause displeasure to people, especially when they are interrupted while enjoying enjoy video or music on social media platforms or music on applications, for instance.


On the other hand, there is considerable evidence that we are still persuaded to buy products through advertisements. In the competitive market, advertising seems to be the most effective strategy to get new customers and increase brand recognition. Furthermore, there are countless ways to advertise these days, one of which is sponsoring celebrities. Hundreds of companies and businesses’ sales have skyrocketed when and their products have been sold out after appearing on famous people’s clips, images, or social media. In addition, the customers tend to purchase goods that are trending on-trend or making great impressions on the public. As a result, companies that have sound advertising campaigns and keep ahead of popular trends still succeed in drawing customers’ attention.


In conclusion, although some people think that advertising no longer affects our choices, I would argue that good advertisements attract buyers.