Dear Frank,

I am writing in order to ask you to give me a permission to have some time off my work . The reason I need it is my intention to get married.

You should have met my fiancée when we had a party at last Christmas. We at long last decided to tie the knots. So our wedding is in January and we wanted our wedding to be the most memorable day in our life. It turned out that we have to do a lot of preparations and have so little time.

That's why I would be very grateful to you if I were given time off since December,12 till December ,23.

While I am absent I think our new co-worker would be suitable in order to carry out my job. It is David. I found him very suitable as he is very diligent and hardworking. Moreover, he has had several training with me I have already asked his opinion about replacing me and he found it very challenging and fruitful for his career.

If you do not mind David working temporary instead of me then since Monday I will give him addition training in order to brush up his knowledge and am going to explain him in great details aspects of working with western clients. Besides it I am going to control progress of work through the internet every day.

I will be back to work on December, 24 and I will try to finish all preparation quickly.

And my future wife and I hope to see you and your wife at our wedding party. I am looking for your reply, Yours sincerel
Dear Frank,

I am writing in order to ask you to give me a permission to have some time off my work . The reason I need it is my intention to get married.

You should have met my fiancée when we had a party at last Christmas. We at long last decided to tie the knots. So our wedding is in January and we wanted our wedding to be the most memorable day in our life. It turned out that we have to do a lot of preparations and have so little time.

That's why I would be very grateful to you if I were given time off since December,12 till December ,23.

While I am absent I think our new co-worker would be suitable in order to carry out my job. It is David. I found him very suitable as he is very diligent and hardworking. Moreover, he has had several training with me I have already asked his opinion about replacing me and he found it very challenging and fruitful for his career.

If you do not mind David working temporary instead of me then since Monday I will give him addition training in order to brush up his knowledge and am going to explain him in great details aspects of working with western clients. Besides it I am going to control progress of work through the internet every day.

I will be back to work on December, 24 and I will try to finish all preparation quickly.

And my future wife and I hope to see you and your wife at our wedding party. I am looking for your reply, Yours sincerely
Hello, milaniyamilla—and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas and struc out unnecessary verbiage below. Please fix them and post your revised version here.

Dear Frank,

I am writing in order to ask you to give me a permission to have some time off my work . The reason I need it is my intention to get married.

You should have met my fiancée when we had a party at last Christmas. We at long last decided to tie the knots. So our wedding is in January and we wanted our wedding it to be the most memorable day in our life. It turned out that we have to do a lot of preparations and have so little time.

That's why I would be very grateful to you if I were given time off since December,12 till December ,23.

While I am absent I think our new co-worker David would be suitable in order to carry out my job. I found him very suitable as he is very diligent and hardworking. Moreover, he has had several training with me I have already asked his opinion about replacing me and he found it very challenging and fruitful for his career.

If you do not mind David working temporary instead of me then since Monday I will give him addition training in order to brush up his knowledge and am going to explain him in great details aspects of working with western clients. Besides it I am going to control progress of work through the internet every day.

I will be back to work on December, 24 and I will try to finish all preparation quickly.

And my future wife and I hope to see you and your wife at our wedding party. I am looking for your reply.

Yours sincerel
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Dear Mister Micabwer,

Thank you for checking my composition I am very grateful to you But I corrected what I can Other things I could correct and even dont have a mind how to correct mistakes which you underlined

Can YOu help me to understand how to correct

Thank you in advance

Mlila

Dear Frank,

I am writing to ask you to give me permission to have some time off work . The reason is my intention to get married.

You might have met my fiancée when we had a party at last Christmas. We at long last decided to tie the knot. So our wedding is in January and we wanted it to be the most memorable day in our life. It turned out that we have to do a lot of preparations and have so little time.

That's why I would be very grateful to you if I were given time off from December,12 till December ,23.

While I am absent I think our new co-worker David would be suited in order to carry out my job as he is very diligent and hardworking. Moreover, he has had training with me and I have already asked his opinion about replacing me and he found it very challenging and fruitful for his career.

If you do not mind David working temporary instead of me then from Monday I will give him additional training in order to brush up his knowledge and am going to explain him in great details aspects of working with western clients. Besides I am going to control the progress of work through the internet every day.

I will be back to work on December, 24 and I will try to finish all preparation connected with weddidng quickly.

And my future wife and I hope to see you and your wife at our wedding party. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely
Dear Frank,

I am writing to ask you to give me some time off because I am getting married. You might have met my fiancée at the party last Christmas. Our wedding is in January and we have a lot of preparation and so little time. I would be very grateful to you if I were given time off from December 12th to 23rd.

I think our new co-worker David would be able to carry out my job while I am gone, as he is very diligent and hardworking. He has had training with me. I have asked him about replacing me and he thinks it would be fruitful for his career. If you do not mind David's working temporarily instead of me, then from Monday I will give him additional training and explain the details of working with Western clients. I will also check in through the internet every day. I would be back to work on December 24th, and I will try to finish my wedding preparations as soon as possible.

And of course my future wife and I hope to see you and your wife at our wedding party! I am looking forward to your reply.
thank you , Mister Macawber
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