• Topic: Do we need music in our lives?

Some people say that music plays an important role in our life. I completely agree with this view.

Firstly, music can unite and connect people. It reaches across cultural and national boundaries. For example, in the Covid-19 epidemic, there are plenty of songs in the world to connect people. Especially, in my country Viet Nam, there are some famous songs as "Ghen Co Vy",...

Secondly, music also can make people relax. After a long stressful day, a song can help you relax your mind and be ready for the new challenge tomorrow. For example, I often listen to some favorite songs or look around for some new songs after a long study day.

In addition to this, music can get people over the diseases. The covid-19 epidemic is a common example. This disease can make people die. But not everyone can die due to it. In Viet Nam, the national songs are sung a lot in the isolation area. So, most patients here can recover from the Covid-19 quickly.

In conclusion, music plays an important part in our life and if our life didn't have music, our life would be very boring.

Some people say that we need music since it music plays an important vital role in our life. (The topic is the necessity of music. You wrote something much less strong.) I completely agree with this view.

Firstly, First, music can unite and connect people. It reaches across cultural and national boundaries. For example, in the Covid-19 epidemic, there are plenty of songs in the world to connect people. Especially, in my country Viet Nam, there are some famous songs as "Ghen Co Vy." ,... (Wrong punctuation)

Secondly, Second, music also can make people relax. After a long stressful day, a song can help you relax your mind and be ready for the new challenge tomorrow. For example, I often listen to some favorite songs or look around for some new songs after a long study day at school.

In addition to this, music can get help people recover from an illness. over the diseases. The covid-19 epidemic is a common example. This disease can make some people die. But not everyone will can die if they contract it; due to it. they are quarantined for 10 days to two weeks. In Viet Nam, the national songs are sung a lot in the isolation area to cheer people up. So, most patients here can recover from the Covid-19 quickly. (That is true. The current mortality rate (Number of deaths/number of confirmed cases) for COVID-19 in Vietnam is 2.5%. That is slightly more than the global average of 2%.)

In conclusion, music plays is an important part in our life and if our life we didn't (do not use contractions in formal writing.) have music, our lives would be very boring.