The bar chart and the table analyze the export value of five different industries in a nation between 2015 and 2016.

It is important that export value in most categories endorsed an upward trend over the given period. In addition, earnings gained from the export of petroleum and engineered goods were highest amongst other products.

As to petroleum products, there was a affordable increase in export value, from just over 60 billion dollars to circa 63 billion – a 3% increase. Similar growth in value was seen in the export of engineer goods.

The remaining categories recorded lower export earnings. The amounts of money gained from exported gems and jewelry declined significantly by 5.18%, from around 43 million dollars in 2015 to just above 40 million in 2016. In contrast, the export earning of textiles went up distincly to over 30 million dollars in 2016 (a 15.24% rise), while the figure for agricultural products was fairly steady, inflated around 30 million.

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The bar chart and the table analyze the export value of revenue from five different industries in a nation between 2015 and 2016.

[ 1] It is important that export value in most categories endorsed Overall, there was an upward trend over the given period. In addition, in earnings gained from the export of commodities, especially petroleum and engineered goods, but gems and jewellery saw a slight dip. were highest amongst other products.

As to Petroleum products , there was a affordable increase in export value rose from just over [ 2] $60 billion dollars to [ 3] circa about $63 billion – a 3% increase. [ 4] Similar growth in value was seen in the export of engineer goods. Engineered goods exports went up by an even higher 8.5%, to just above $60 billion, but the biggest percentage increase (15.24%) was in textiles, which went up to slightly over $30 billion in 2016.

The remaining categories recorded lower export earnings. The amount of money gained from exported gems and jewelry declined significantly by 5.18%, from around $43 [ 5] billion million dollars in 2015 to just above $40 billion a year later. million in 2016. In contrast, the export earning of textiles went up distincly to over 30 million dollars in 2016 (a 15.24% rise), while the figure for agricultural products was fairly steady, and saw only a negligible increase, remaining [ 6] inflated around $30 billion. million.

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[ 1]: That is very unnatural. You do not need fillers. This is a summary task.

[ 2]: Note the $ sign.

[ 3]: “circa” is largely used with dates.

[ 4]: That is incorrect.

[ 5]: Silly mistakes can cost you valuable marks in the exam. ALWAYS go over your own work before submitting it.

[ 6]: “inflated” is incorrect in that sentence! Keep your phrasing straightforward.

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