Topic : You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite her/him to the party. In your letter:
Dear Sara,
I am writing this letter to invite you to a surprise party which I am planning to hold it this weekend. As you know, Jane is a new student and she has been studying in our school for two months. I talked to her yesterday. She was very sad. In addition, I found out that her birthday is on next week. So, I decided to hold this party and make her happy.
Jane's birthday is on next Sunday. But, she might be busy at this time. Therefore, I have to hold this party Saturday at 8 pm.
I talked to other classmates and we decided to help each other in this way. Thus, it would be better that everyone bring something for this party. We will need a CD player, some drinks and meals. I suggest to you bring a CD player, because we will need it so much.
I hope you can come to this party. Please let me know what your decision is.
All the best,
John.
- Explain the reason for the party
- Give the date and time of the party
- Suggest what the classmate could bring to the party
Dear Sara,
I am writing this letter to invite you to a surprise party which I am planning to hold it this weekend. As you know, Jane is a new student and she has been studying in our school for two months. I talked to her yesterday. She was very sad. In addition, I found out that her birthday is on next week. So, I decided to hold this party and make her happy.
Jane's birthday is on next Sunday. But, she might be busy at this time. Therefore, I have to hold this party Saturday at 8 pm.
I talked to other classmates and we decided to help each other in this way. Thus, it would be better that everyone bring something for this party. We will need a CD player, some drinks and meals. I suggest to you bring a CD player, because we will need it so much.
I hope you can come to this party. Please let me know what your decision is.
All the best,
John.
Hi; I've made a few suggestions in your letter.
Dear Sara,
I am writing this letter to invite you to a surprise party which I am planning to hold it this weekend. As you know, Jane is a new student and she has been studying in our school for two months. I talked to her yesterday. She was very sad. In addition, I found out that her birthday is on next week. So, I decided to hold this party and make her happy. (The casual expression woud be: to throw a party. You can also have a party, give a party or host a party. Generally, we hold a meeting or conference.)
Jane's birthday is on next Sunday. But, she might be busy at this (that) time. Therefore, I have to hold this party Saturday at 8 pm.
I talked to other classmates and we decided to help each other in this way. Thus, it would be better that everyone bring something for this party. We will need a CD player, some drinks and meals. I suggest that to you bring a CD player, because we will need it so much.
I hope you can come to this party. Please let me know what your decision is.
All the best,
John.
Dear Sara,
I am writing this letter to invite you to a surprise party which I am planning to hold it this weekend. As you know, Jane is a new student and she has been studying in our school for two months. I talked to her yesterday. She was very sad. In addition, I found out that her birthday is on next week. So, I decided to hold this party and make her happy. (The casual expression woud be: to throw a party. You can also have a party, give a party or host a party. Generally, we hold a meeting or conference.)
Jane's birthday is on next Sunday. But, she might be busy at this (that) time. Therefore, I have to hold this party Saturday at 8 pm.
I talked to other classmates and we decided to help each other in this way. Thus, it would be better that everyone bring something for this party. We will need a CD player, some drinks and meals. I suggest that to you bring a CD player, because we will need it so much.
I hope you can come to this party. Please let me know what your decision is.
All the best,
John.
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