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I am doing a self evaluation on my presentation that i did last week.

please check my grammar here. If you have any suggestion to make these sentences better, please feel free to comment.

The class’s feedback was very helpful to me because they actually pointed out my weakness.

Most of the groups said one common thing to me. When I was delivering the presentation in the class, I was talking too fast and not having enough eye-contact with the audience.

They suggested me that I need to relax, talk slower, and keep eye contact with the audience because I seemed like that I was reciting everything.

Most of the groups said that I have good visual aids and well organized presentation, and I agree with them because I have devoted a lot of time in organization and visual aids.

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thank you very much for checking the sentences.
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The class’s feedback was very helpful to me because they actually pointed out my weakness.

Most of the groups said one common thing to me. When I was delivering the presentation in the class, I was talking too fast and not having enough eye contact with the audience.

They suggested to me that I need to relax, talk slower, and keep eye contact with the audience because I seemed like I was reciting everything.

Most of the groups said that I had good visual aids and a well-organized presentation, and I agree with them because I have devoted a lot of time to organization and visual aids.
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