Some people look forward to a year of travelling, a “gap year”, before they begin work or university and see it as a chance to broaden their horizon. For ohters this is an expensive waste of time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People are facing the dilemma of whether decide to take a gap year would be an opportunity to broaden knowledge or just a waste of time. However, as to whether it is a blessing or a curse, there arises a heated debate among people with different background.

On one side of the argument, there are many who claim that, before attending tertiary education and beginning to work, taking a gap year would broaden their knowledge. Under certain assumption, this can be construed as traveling before begin work and take the third education or working before going to university. These activities help them to gain more knowledge and broaden their mind. By way of illustration, before attending university which is specialised in tourism, people could spend their time travelling around to expose various cultures, get to know different people in different countries and learn how to communicate with different them in basics. Eventually, when they attend tourism university the efficacy of their studying would be far more excellent than students who did not take a gap year to travel.

However, there are some subscribe to the view that it would be no use spending a year off to travel instead of going to university or begin to work. This means that they find that they could learn nothing which is beneficial for their future in condition that they take a gap year. Taking a gap year is just a fancy reason for their laziness. As a result, when they begin to go to university, they would like to fall behind and could not keep up wit h their studies. This may lead to a peer pressure as people who are at their age are sophomore while they are just a freshman.

In conclusion, taking a gap year would bring both benefit and drawbacks to people. To my way of thinking, it is beneficial to take a gap year for broading the mind.

[ 1] Taking a gap year is an option many high school leavers consider. People are facing the [ 2] It is seen as a chance to take a break before starting university or getting a job. However, some face the dilemma of whether decide to take a gap year would be an opportunity to broaden knowledge their minds, or if it is just a waste of time. However, as to whether it is a blessing or a curse, there arises a heated debate among people with different background. [ 3] In my opinion, a gap year has more benefits than drawbacks.

On one side of the argument, [ 4] there are many some who claim that it would be no use spending a year off to travel instead of going to university or begin to starting work. This means that they find that they could learn nothing which is beneficial for their future in condition that they take a gap year. They argue that taking a gap year is just a fancy reason for their laziness. As a result, when they begin to go to university, they would like to likely fall behind and could not manage to keep up with their studies. This may lead to a peer to feelings of pressure and uncertainty, neither of which are conducive to academic success. as people who are at their age are sophomore while they are just a freshman.

However, there are some subscribe to the view others legitimately point out that before attending tertiary education and or getting a job, beginning to work, taking a gap year [ 5] is useful. would broaden their knowledge. Under certain assumption, this can be construed as For a start, it allows young students to go traveling before they begin work and take the or commit to third-level education. or working before going to university. These activities This can help them to gain more knowledge and broaden their mind. By way of illustration, before attending university which is specialised in starting a bachelor’s degree in tourism, people students could spend their some time travelling around to expose experience various cultures, get to know different people in different countries and learn how to communicate with different them. in basics. Eventually, when they attend tourism university the efficacy of That real-life experience would help them with their studying later in university. would be far more excellent than students who did not take a gap year to travel.

[ 6] In conclusion, although taking a gap year can delay further studies, it is an opportunity for young people to broaden their minds and gain valuable life experience. it would bring both benefit and drawbacks to people. To my way of thinking, it is beneficial to take a gap year for broading the mind.

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[ 1]: Start with a general sentence just to introduce the main topic to the reader.

[ 2]: Then give some background.

[ 3]: When you are asked to provide your own opinion or take a position on an issue, you MUST do so in the last sentence of the introduction.

[ 4]: I switched your body paragraphs around, because we normally first write a paragraph covering the point we oppose, then we counter with a larger and stronger paragraph that outlines our position.

[ 5]: The topic sentence needs to be general enough to cover the scope of the entire paragraph, not just one point in it.

[ 6]: Do not write a meaningless generic conclusion like that. The conclusion is the most specific part of the essay, so you should just write a couple of sentences to summarize the main points from the body paragraphs.