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Would you correct my english letter?

I am a korean student and I graduated from the Rothberg International School at the Hebrew University for the M.A program and my major was biblical study ( Bible and it's world). Currently I am studying at the Hebrew University in Jerusalem for the complementary course of Ph.D in the department of the Old Testament. I am considering to apply the M.A program of your school. I have a technical question on Toefl test, since I studied the M.A program in English, do I need to submit the Toelf score? My toefl score was expired a few years ago, so I would like to know your requirement in this case.

Many Thanks.
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Welcome Daumring;
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I am a Korean student who and I graduated from the Rothberg International School at the Hebrew University with an for the M.A. degree, majoring in program and my major was Biblical study ( the Bible and its it's world). Currently I am studying at the Hebrew University in Jerusalem for the complementary course of Ph.D in the department of the Old Testament. I am considering to applying for your the M.A. program, of your school but I have a technical question regarding on the Toefl test score. Since I studied the M.A. program in English, do I need to submit my the Toelf score? My most recent Toefl score was expired a few years ago, so I would like to know your rules requirement in this case.