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Hello!

Could you please, check if there is any mistake in the following ?

Some false news about celebrities can ruin their reputation or cause a big overturn in their lives. Once a famous TV talkshow host (or a TV presenter), comedian and singer was having dinner when he read a terrible false news about himself that he had died in a car accident that daybreak According to it – from a sensational tabloid - the car had lost the control and crashed into a flower-bed, capsizing many times. It was said that ‘some witnesses’ had seen him under the effect of drugs while listening to one of his hits. The ambulance had even taken him to a nearby hospital, but it was too late!

After such nonsense he himself phoned to his family and friends in order to tranquilize them about the bad joke and afterwards to the tabloid’s person in charge to complain about that headline, but he almost 'lost his head' when the person answered that news couldn’t be rectified anymore. What a joke!

Js
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AnonymousHello!

Could you please, check if there is any mistake in the following ?

Some false news about celebrities can ruin their reputation or cause a big overturn in their lives. Once a famous TV talkshow host (or a TV presenter), comedian and singer was having dinner when he read a terrible false news about himself that he had died in a car accident that daybreak According to it – from a sensational tabloid - the car had lost the control and crashed into a flower-bed, capsizing many times. It was said that ‘some witnesses’ had seen him under the effect of drugs while listening to one of his hits. The ambulance had even taken him to a nearby hospital, but it was too late!

After such nonsense he himself phoned to his family and friends in order to tranquilize them about the bad joke and afterwards to the tabloid’s person in charge to complain about that headline, but he almost 'lost his head' when the person answered that news couldn’t be rectified anymore. What a joke!

Js

Hi, Goodman!

Thanks for your help. Of course I'm not upset about the comments,but just a little bit sad with so many mistakes, as you said. Who knows one day I'll have a perfect handwriting, isn't it ? And answering you question I live in Japan in spite of my name.

Best wishes,

Joshua
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Hi Josh,

Thanks for sharing your location with me. So I take it you are Japanese student, aren't you? Based on your last reply, you seem to write pretty well. If you are serious about improving, or even perfecting your English, I can only give you one advice, "practice made perfect". I have no doubt anyone can achieve perfect writing given plenty of practice. Learning a language takes a lot of time, and for a student of Asian origin to try to perfect a lauguage; especially English, seems almost impossible; doesn't it. But I'll assure you, it can be done with intense reading, writing and listening. Just try to increase your exposure to Englsih. Youll be surprised with the result. Emotion: smileGood luck to you!
Hello, Goodman!

Yes, I am and thanks for the advice.

Best Wishes,

Joshua.