Can someone check my verb tense in this essay. i haven been struggle with the verb tenses, and please check my grammar too. i really appreciated it.

When Bad Things Happen to Good People

In the book” When Bad Thing Happen to Good People”, by Harold S. Kushner, it talks about God. In this book Harold wrote lots about God and human being. The topic I chose to read was “God Leaves Us Room to Be Human and “God Can’t Do Everything but He Can Do Some Important Things”. In the chapter of God Leaves Us Room to Be Human, it talks about God has gave us a feeling to feel what is bad and good. The author states that we are human being was suffered that situation is because of Adam and Ave. As we start learning the bible we need to know a story about Adam and Eve. Kushner re-interprets the story of Adam and Eve to make the point that the ability to choose between good and evil is what makes us human.

In this book the author states that, about the human being feeling and the way they were suffer in this world. We live in a fallen world and there is evil and sin in the world. God has given us free will, and some freely choose to do bad things. I had learned one thing in this topic is God created human being and animals but God gave us individual job in this world. God gave us the feeling to feels what is the pain and complicated lives in this world while the animal live without the moral problems and moral decision. The categories of “Bad and Good” don’t really exist for animals. For human being we need to decision what we want and what we like in our life. The point in this book is God want us to be aware being in trouble by hurting other people. When it comes to this question” why bad things happen to good people?" The reason is human being leaves us free to hurt each other, and God can't stop us without taking away the freedom that makes us human. He gives us the freedom to choose for live and enjoy life, and the freedom to make right and wrong choices. But unfortunately we end up hurting ourselves and other people. Human beings can do everything to hurt other, and God can only look down in pity how human beings should behave.

God didn’t forces us to hurt other fellow human being but we the one who choose to hurt them. So we don’t have the right thing to blame God that he didn’t care us. God wanted human being be love each other and tread them like your family. The point in this book is the author wanted us to learn what to choose between good and evil. Choosing between good and evil is complicated by the fact that out of evil, God always brings good that is greater than the evil. However, it sometimes seems that every option open to us will bring evil as well as good. In our life there are two roads, the road of success is not straight and the road of bad is very narrow; which tempted many of us to choose the bad road because there are no obstacles on our way. For example- Some folks chose the evil ways because when they do something wrong they will keep to continue doing it. In this world we are all sinners that tempted some folks to chose the evil than the good things. As I know every one of us can be good and free from the evil by follow God commandment and stop hurting other people.

Here my story about my dad who passed away on 2000 of May. It been eight years now but I still missed him and the ways he tread his kids. When my dad passed away at that moment I felt so depressed and start hating God. I always wondered why God did this to my dad; why he took my dad from my mom and left my mom alone. Why God took all the good people in this world and leave the bad people here, that question is always pop-up in my mind. I know everyone of us are always blaming God when it comes of losing someone in our life but is not his fault. As years passed, I gained wisdom and my anger eventually was replaced with understanding. I know everyone of us had experienced of hardship in life. That is the reason why God wanted us to feel the painful and the complicated life in this world. We as his children must follow his commandment and give thanks to him because he created this universe for us to lives. He also wanted us to take good care the things he created in this world.

God can do every things in this world but we human being can’t see it. He know what is right and wrong in this universe because he the one who created this world. So we human being should take care the things he had created. God taught us to love other people by not hurting them. I know many of us had experienced a hardship in life but we can’t blame God. Yeah it true he created us but he didn’t want us to live like that but we the one who choose that tragic life. So we don’t have the right things to blame him when it come to obligated.
i only had time to check the first 2 paragraphs

The things that i was unsure of are:

IM NOT 100% SURE OF THIS SO ITS BEST IF SOMEONE ELSE CHECKS IT INCASE I MISSED ANYTHING


  1. "When Bad Thing Happen to Good People" If thats how the title is spelt then no problems but i think it might be "When bad THINGS happen to good peopel".
  2. I'm not sure of what your trying to say in this line "The author states that we are human being was suffered that situation is because of Adam and Ave"
  3. Not sure about "In this book the author states that, about the human being feeling and the way they were suffer in this world"
  4. Not sure about "The point in this book is God want us to be aware being in trouble by hurting other people"
This is what i re-wrote (how i depicted the points 1-4[above])

In the book “When Bad Things Happen to Good People”, by Harold S. Kushner, it talks about God. In this book Kushner wrote a lot about God and human beings. The topic I chose to read was “God Leaves Us Room to Be Human” and “God Can’t Do Everything but He Can Do Some Important Things”. In the chapter of God Leaves Us Room to Be Human, it talks about how God has given us a feeling to feel what is bad and what is good. The author states that we human beings suffered that situation because of Adam and Eve. As we start learning the bible we need to know the story about Adam and Eve. Kushner re-interprets the story of Adam and Eve to make the point that the ability to choose between good and evil is what makes us human.

In this book the author talks about the human beings feelings and the way they suffer in this world. We live in a fallen world where there is evil and sin. God has given us free will, and some freely choose to do bad things. I have learnt one thing in this topic and that is God created human beings and animals but God gave us individual jobs in this world. God has given us the feeling to feel what are the pains and living complicated lives in this world while the animals live without the moral problems and moral decisions because the categories of ‘bad and good’ don’t really exist for animals. For human beings we need to decide what we want and what we like in our lives. The point in this book is that God wants us to be aware of the consequences when we people hurt other people. When it comes to this question ‘why things happen to good people?’ The reason is that human beings are free to hurt each other and God can’t stop us without taking away the freedom that makes us human. He gives us the freedom to choose out life and enjoy life and also the freedom to make right and wrong choices. But unfortunately we end up hurting ourselves and other people. Human beings can do everything to hurt each other and God can only look down in pity because of how human beings behave.
thank you for checking my essay. if you have time, can you proofread my 3 -5 paragraph.
I'm sure there have a lot verb tense mistake there.can you help me to fix it?
anyway thank you so much for fixing my essay. i really appreciated it.