There is often debate as to what causes and effects people are tending to spend more and more time at their work. There are many reasons for this trend and i believe the consequences may be damaging to health and family life.

On the one hand, there are two major reasons for this problem. One of them is the rapid industrialization over the past few years which have impacted companies to change their way of working. Working hours at the workplace has increased than before because of the workload to achieve the targets. For instance, staffs work longer to achieve monthly targets set by their managers. Another reason is that people are becoming a part of the race to earn more money and purchase their desired materials like car, house, electronic devices, as a result, they end up working extra hours to earn compensation.

Because of the aforementioned reasons, employees can face health problems and family issues. Firstly, overworking is detrimental to health. For instance, spending on a computer for long hours can damage eye sights and may cause stress. Moreover they could end up experiencing some mental health problems. Secondly, this also creates a gap between parents and childrens. The reason is they do not spend much time with their family, especially in a single parent household. For example, an employee has a timeline to submit the project so he will work even after working hours are over, as a result, he won't have time to participate in raising his children.

In conclusion, due to the rapid industrialization and personal desires, people are spending more time at the workplace, causing mental and physical health and family problems.

There is often debate as to what causes and effects people are tending to spend more and more time at their work. There are many reasons for this trend, and I believe the consequences may be damaging to health and family life.

On the one hand, there are two major reasons for this problem. One of them is the rapid industrialization increase in commercial competition over the past few years which have impacted has forced many companies to change their way of working. Working hours at the workplace has have increased than before because of and the workload expanded to achieve greater productivity and profits. the targets. For instance, staffs staff at some auditing firms work longer to achieve monthly targets set by their managers. Another reason is that people are becoming a part of the race to earn more money and purchase their desired materials like and raise their standard of living. [ 1] More money means they can buy a new car, house, or the latest electronic devices. As a result, they end up working extra hours to earn more. compensation.

Because of the aforementioned reasons, employees can face health problems and family issues. Firstly, overworking is detrimental to health. For instance, spending on a computer for long hours staring at a computer screen can damage eyesight and may cause stress. Moreover, they could end up experiencing some mental health problems. Secondly, this overwork also creates a gap between parents and children. The reason is they Overworked parents do not spend much time with their family, especially in single-parent households. For example, an employee has a timeline to submit the who has a project deadline so he will work even after working after hours and even weekends and will not are over, as a result, he [ 2] won't have time to be with his or her spouse and children. participate in raising his children.

In conclusion, due to the rapid industrialization commercial competition and personal desire to earn more money are the main reasons people are spending more time at the workplace, causing but such overwork causes mental and physical health problems and family issues. problems.

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[ 2]: Do not use abbreviations in formal writing.