It is true that nowadays, people are taking advantage of plastic in aspects related to food and drink. From my perspective, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages

It is undeniable that plastic products may bring great benefits to producers as well as customers. In terms of producers, business companies may utilize plastic containers which have a reasonable price to lower the cost. This means that these firms can gain more profit by cutting packaging cost . Regarding customers’ benefits, due to the convenience of its lightweight and durability, people may feel more comfortable transporting food products. For example, people are likely to purchase plastic bottles rather than glass ones owing to the bulky package of glass products

On the other hand, the overuse of plastic bags may pose a threat to the environment and living organisms. As plastics are attributed to be non-degradable things, traditional way to dissolve is burning them that generates toxic fumes into the air , thus plastic waste disposal may have a negative impact on the quality of air.As a consequence, when people inhale into body, there is likelihood that they may suffer from respiratory disease. Moreover, those who consume food products, specifically, fishes can be subjected to microplastics because marine creatures may easily accumulate these toxic substances under the water. As a result, there is a growing risk of digestive disorders or even cancer to people.

In conclusion, although the efficient utilization of plastics may offer several benefits to the enterprises in terms of profit and bring convenience to customers, it may negatively affect the environment and be one of the reasons for human health’s deterioration. I think the drawbacks outweigh the benefits in the long term

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Plastic containers have become more prevalent than ever. They are used in many businesses such as in the food and beverage sector. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

[ 1] It is true that nowadays, people are taking advantage of Plastic products are very widespread today, and especially in aspects related to the food and drink industry. They are used to make packaging and containers for many snacks, drinks and food products. However, there is much debate about whether plastics have more drawbacks than benefits. From my perspective, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

On one hand, [ 2] It is undeniable that plastic products may bring great benefits to producers as well as to customers. In terms of producers, business companies may utilize For businesses, plastic containers and other forms of packaging are cheap and can significantly which have a reasonable price to lower the cost. This means that these firms can gain more profit by cutting packaging cost. Regarding customers’ benefits, due to the For customers, plastic containers offer convenience, of its light weight, and durability, and people may feel more comfortable transporting food products in plastic packaging. [ 3] For example, people are likely to purchase plastic bottles rather than glass ones owing to the bulky package of glass products Moreover, plastic containers and bottles are disposable, so they are much more hygienic than reusable alternatives.

On the other hand, the overuse of plastic bags, bottles, and containers may pose a threat to the environment and living organisms. As plastics are attributed to be non-degradable, things, traditional way to dissolve is burning many people burn them, and that generates toxic fumes into the atmosphere, thus plastic waste disposal may have a negative impact on degrading the quality of air, and increasing As a consequence, when people inhale into body, there is likelihood that they may suffer from the incidence of respiratory diseases. Moreover, those who consume food products, specifically, fishes can be subjected to fish eat microplastics because marine creatures may easily and accumulate these toxic substances in their flesh. under the water. As a result, there is a growing risk of digestive disorders or even cancer to people who eat those fish.

In conclusion, although the efficient utilization of plastics may offer several benefits to the enterprises in terms of profit and bring cost saving for businesses and convenience to customers, it they may negatively affect impact the environment detrimentally and be one of are among the reasons for illnesses such as cancer. human health’s deterioration. I think the drawbacks outweigh the benefits in the long term

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