Topic: the line graph below give information from a 2008 report about consumption of energi in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030.

The line graph illustrates the amount of USA energy consumed since 1980 with expection until 2030.

As can be seen, petrol and oil energy is by far the most popular energy consumption in the USA while nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower energy was lowest over the given period.

In 1980, petrol and oil energy started at 35 quadrillion and stand at the 1st place, wherease coal and natural gas energy started at 20 and 15 quadrillion respectively. In that year, nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower only one fifth of the amount of coal energy. In the period between 1980 and 2015, petrol and oil energy was increased slightly to 41 quadrillion. Also in that year, there was a fluctuation in the number of coal and natural gas energy, at 22 quadrillion, while three remainning energy were remain relatively stable at around 5 quadrllion.

By 2030, petrol and oil energy is predicted to rise considerably and reach a peak in the last year, at 47 quadrillion, and the amount of coal energy is expected to grow rapidly to 28 quadrillion. Lastly, natural gas, nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower energy is anticipated to remain the same figure like it was in 2015.

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The line graph illustrates ( poor word choice. Read my advice) the amount of USA energy (incorrect) consumed since 1980 with expection until 2030. (Incomplete. You did not mention that there are different types of fuels and energy sources. You did not mention the units of measure, either. You essay will lack cohesion and coherence. Read my advice.)

As can be seen, (Read my advice) petrol and oil energy is by far the most popular energy consumption (wrong phrase) in the USA while nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower energy was (wrong tense. This graph contains past and future points of time. You should not use the past tense for future events.) lowest (wrong form. One ONE category can be "lowest") over the given period.

In 1980, petrol and oil energy started at 35 quadrillion and stand (wrong tense) at highest usage the 1st place, wherease coal and natural gas energy started at 20 and 15 quadrillion respectively. In that year, nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower only one fifth of the amount of coal (ungrammatical sentence. No verb.) energy. In the period between 1980 and 2015, petrol and oil energy was increased slightly to 41 quadrillion. Also in that year, (Which one? 1980 or 2015?) there was a fluctuation (wrong word). in the number (wrong word. The subject is amounts, which is non-count. You cannot use "number" for money, food, luggage, homework, advice, water, or other non-count nouns.) of coal and natural gas energy, at 22 quadrillion, while three remainning energy were remain relatively stable (not a good word..) constant at around 5 quadrllion.

By 2030, petrol and oil energy is predicted to rise considerably and reach a peak (wrong word) in the last year, at 47 quadrillion, and the amount of coal energy is expected to grow rapidly to 28 quadrillion. Lastly, natural gas, nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower energy is anticipated to remain constant. the same figure like it was in 2015.


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